WEEK2 Persnal Responsibility Essay REV1
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Personal Responsibility
Jorge L. Perez
GEN/200
July 5th, 2013
Tina Shaw
Abstract
Personal Responsibility
Personal responsibility is the eagerness to accept the importance of your [Eliminate second person (you, your) in academic documents and avoid addressing the reader directly. Prefer third-person pronouns (he, she, they, it)] duty to your [second person] family and friends. It’s [A contraction ending in "s" (meaning "is") is inappropriate in academic writing--write it out] [A contraction ending in "s" (meaning "is") is inappropriate in academic writing--write out "It is"] [Contractions are inappropriate in college writing, spell out "it is" (or "it has")] about holding yourself [second person] accountable for what you [second person] think, say and [in academic writing, if this is a series, place a comma before the final conjunction (and)] do. As an individual you [second person] have the obligation to work on your
Personal Responsibility
Jorge L. Perez
GEN/200
July 5th, 2013
Tina Shaw
Abstract
Personal Responsibility
Personal responsibility is the eagerness to accept the importance of your [Eliminate second person (you, your) in academic documents and avoid addressing the reader directly. Prefer third-person pronouns (he, she, they, it)] duty to your [second person] family and friends. It’s [A contraction ending in "s" (meaning "is") is inappropriate in academic writing--write it out] [A contraction ending in "s" (meaning "is") is inappropriate in academic writing--write out "It is"] [Contractions are inappropriate in college writing, spell out "it is" (or "it has")] about holding yourself [second person] accountable for what you [second person] think, say and [in academic writing, if this is a series, place a comma before the final conjunction (and)] do. As an individual you [second person] have the obligation to work on your