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3-Day [Write out numbers under 10] Diet Analysis
Janice Springfield
SCI/241
September 16, 2012
Tiffany Glenn

3-Day [Write out numbers under 10] Diet Analysis
c| | | | | | | | | | Jan1's Food Groups and Calories Report 09/09/12 - 09/14/12| Your personal Calorie goal is 2000. Your plan amounts are based on meeting your nutrient needs.|

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| | Food Groups| Target| Average Eaten| Status| | Grains| 6 ounce(s)| 3½ ounce(s)| Under| | Whole Grains| ≥ 3 ounce(s)| 1½ ounce(s)| Under| | Refined Grains| ≤ 3 ounce(s)| 2 ounce(s)| OK [Avoid using forms of "okay" in academic writing.] | | Vegetables| 2½ cup(s)| 1¼ cup(s)| Under| | Dark Green| 1½ cup(s)/week| ¼ cup(s)| Under| | Red & Orange| 5½ cup(s)/week| 1¾ cup(s)| Under| | Beans & Peas| 1½ cup(s)/week| 0 cup(s)| Under| | Starchy| 5 cup(s)/week| 0 cup(s)| Under| | Other| 4 cup(s)/week| 2 cup(s)| Under| | Fruits| 2 cup(s)| ½ cup(s)| Under| | Fruit Juice| No Specific Target| ¼ cup(s)| No Specific Target| | Whole Fruit| No Specific Target| ¼ cup(s)| No Specific Target| | Dairy| 3 cup(s)| ½ cup(s)| Under| | Milk & Yogurt| No Specific Target| ¼ cup(s)| No Specific Target| | Cheese| No Specific Target| ¼ cup(s)| No Specific Target| | Protein Foods| 5½ ounce(s)| 5½ ounce(s)| OK [Avoid using forms of "okay" in academic writing.] | | Seafood| 8 ounce(s)/week| 0 ounce(s)| Under| | Meat, Poultry & Eggs| No Specific Target| 2½ ounce(s)| No Specific Target| | Nuts, Seeds & Soy| No Specific Target| 3 ounce(s)|...
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