10. Which of the following hypotheses is an alternate hypothesis?
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Immigration reform for labor coalition
Shannon Wilson
Pol/433
Jan.8/2013
William R. Liesman
Immigration reform for labor coalition
The [Make sure paragraph indentation is five to seven spaces or one tab stop] living conditions and job opportunities of the immigrants have transformed into a healthier environment, and the challenges they faced have become easier to handle. Immigration has been the key to success in some cases, but in others their stories are harsh and hard to hear. The transformation that immigration has gone through over the past century is tremendous and should be recognized [The passive voice is a form of "be" (be) and a participle (recognized). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to read. Prefer the active voice. For example, passive voice = The paper was completed on time. Active voice = the student completed the paper on time. See Center for Writing
Immigration reform for labor coalition
Shannon Wilson
Pol/433
Jan.8/2013
William R. Liesman
Immigration reform for labor coalition
The [Make sure paragraph indentation is five to seven spaces or one tab stop] living conditions and job opportunities of the immigrants have transformed into a healthier environment, and the challenges they faced have become easier to handle. Immigration has been the key to success in some cases, but in others their stories are harsh and hard to hear. The transformation that immigration has gone through over the past century is tremendous and should be recognized [The passive voice is a form of "be" (be) and a participle (recognized). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to read. Prefer the active voice. For example, passive voice = The paper was completed on time. Active voice = the student completed the paper on time. See Center for Writing
References: "Ellis Island - Hudson County, New Jersey.". USGS. Retrieved 1 January 2011. Mayer, Brian; Brown, Phil; Morello-Frosch, Rachel. Sociological Forum. Dec2010, Vol. 25 Issue 4, p746-768. 24p. DOI: 10.1111/j.1573-7861.2010.01210.x http://www.atg.wa.gov/immigrationservices.aspx