My Parents' Birthday

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Name …Kittiya

Thepkong… ID …..53144671……

Section …1… School ……School of Liberal Arts……

Assignment 1: A process analysis essay Write a five-paragraph process analysis essay (450-500 words) on the process of preparing for a special occasion. Use 12 point Times New Roman font to follow the steps below and write down your ideas in each step. (The deadline is February 5, 2013, 3:30 p.m. Late work without showing any official record will not be accepted.) Step 1 Brainstorming Write down ideas and vocabulary for your essay in the space below. You may want to list the steps of the process in sequential order. See page 35. French fries Stage 2 Buy some Buy fruits Make Foods Barbecues ingredients of cake Stage 1 Prepare My Parents’ Birthday Fried chickens

Cake

Buy ingredients of foods

Stage 3 Share foods Celebrat e

Surprise My parents

Step 2 Outlining Write an outline for your essay. Introduction Hook:

Go to the garden

The person that I love the most in the world is my parents who are very important for me every day. Background information: One of the days that we were happy together was my parents’ birthday. My parents were born in the same month. They were born in July but that was different year.

Name …Kittiya

Thepkong… ID …..53144671……

Section …1… School ……School of Liberal Arts……

Thesis statement: I and my family prepared the celebration for my parents’ birthday in the garden at my home before two days that my parents didn’t know because we would like to surprise them. Body Paragraph 1 Topic Sentence: We thought that we will make some foods for a special celebration. Steps in sequence with explanations: The foods that we decided to make at the party such as French fries, barbecues, friend chicken, and a surprised cake. Body Paragraph 2 Topic Sentence: Before the beginning, I had to find the strategies of making a cake with the microwave. Steps in sequence with explanations: I tried to find the best way with a long time in the internet and looked at the websites. Eventually, I found a good website that taught about how to make a cake with the microwave if didn’t have an oven baked cake and a lot of time. Body Paragraph 3 Topic Sentence: After I knew about the technique, I went to the market with my brother and bought all ingredients for making a cake. Steps in sequence with explanations: I explain about the step in preparing and making the cake that I will surprise for my parents in their birthday.

Name …Kittiya

Thepkong… ID …..53144671……

Section …1… School ……School of Liberal Arts……

Conclusion Restatement: Everything that we made together in my parents’ birthday shows about the happiness and loveliness in my family. Evaluation, recommendation, or warning: Although this party has a lot of planning and preparing, it is a best and impressed occasion for my family that we can’t forget it. Everyone was very happy and funny.

Name …Kittiya

Thepkong… ID …..53144671……

Section …1… School ……School of Liberal Arts……

Step 3 Writing Use your brainstorming notes and outline to write your first draft, check it for mistakes and write a revised version on a separate piece of paper using a double-spaced format. My parents’ birthday The person that I love the most in the world is my parents who are very important for me every day. One of the days that we were happy together was my parents’ birthday. My parents were born in the same month. They were born in July but that was different year. I and my family prepared the celebration for my parents’ birthday in the garden at my home before two days that my parents didn’t know because we would like to surprise them. We thought that we will make some foods for a special celebration. The foods that we decided to make at the party such as French fries, barbecues, friend chickens, and a surprised cake. I wanted to make a surprised cake by myself and my sisters will make another foods but I had a big problem, it was I didn’t know how to...
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