Preview

A SCARY NIGHT

Better Essays
Open Document
Open Document
703 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
A SCARY NIGHT
A SCARY NIGHT
It was an old and creepy house, my friends and I where on camping. The wind blew heavily that the tress where dancing and there was lightening. One of the girls was in the kitchen and another in the palour watching TV. Suddenly the lights went out, we were all scared. We heard screaming coming from the neighborhood which made us more frightened.
Suddenly we heard a bang which made us run upstairs to the room. We all went under the bed as terrified as we were. We saw shadows and movements. All of a sudden we heard footsteps growing louder and louder and then we saw a man’s foot by the door. The person walked in the room looking around. Lucky for us he didn’t see us and he went out. We heard a window shatter. One of the girls wanted to scream but I held her mouth shut. We stayed under the bed for what felt like an hour.
We finally decided to get out of there and go check if anyone was still in the house. Because there was no light, each of us held a touch and walked down the stairs. “You two check the kitchen, Ann and I will check the sitting room” I said to two of my friends. They both agreed and went off. Ann stood very close to me terrified than I am. We reached the sitting room and pointed our touch everywhere. “No sign of him anywhere” said Ann. I shook my head in agreement with her. “Let’s check the Guest room” I said. We both walked towards the Guest room and pointed the touch again. “Nothing” said Ann, “he must have left”. “I hope so” I said to her.
In the kitchen, Sue and Gracie where still looking. “I’m scared” said Gracie. “Here, take this” Sue said handing Gracie a knife, “use this to protect yourself. Gracie so terrified took the knife from Sue and shook her head in agreement. They searched the entire kitchen and saw nothing. With a sigh of relief the left the kitchen and went back to the sitting room to look for Ann and I. “We couldn’t find anyone or anything in the kitchen” Sue said whispering to me. I shook my head and said okay.
We

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Good Essays

    At bedtime, Jennie agreed to let Maurice, Martha, Louis, Jenny, and Betty stay up and play with their toys as long as they locked the door and turned out the lights. Later that night, Jennie wakes up to a phone ringing. She gets up and answers the phone. The woman who had called asked for someone Jennie didn't know, laughed, and then hung up. She then looked and saw the doors unlocked and the lights on. She locked the door and turned out the lights, assuming her children had gone to bed. She went back to sleep only to be woken up again by a sound of something hitting the roof and rolling off. She dozed back to sleep. Only thirty minutes later, she woke up to the smell of…

    • 1251 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    I started by asking Mr. and Mrs. Smith what they remembered about the night. The mother hesitantly replied saying her son had told her that he heard weird footsteps before he was attacked. She then started to weep from the realization that the footsteps were from the attacker. As her husband tried to comfort his grieving wife, I asked him what was taken from the house. He thought for a moment and then replied, “Nothing, not a God damn thing.”…

    • 1028 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Once the investigators had finished eating up the lamb leg they continued to search her house for any other clues. They searched every single room of the house. Three hours later they started gathering their materials. “Well Mrs. Maloney it doesn’t looked like we have came to a conclusion on exactly what happened to your husband.” One of the police officers told her. “Oh, but you will still continue to search for answers right?” Mrs. Maloney questioned him. “It doesn’t look like we have come to much luck in this investigation. Goodnight now.” The police officer replied. The investigators and the police officer were now heading out of the house and getting into their cars and going away. Mrs. Maloney walked closed the front door and walked back into the living room. “Gosh, I don’t know what I would have done if I was caught.” Mrs. Maloney thought to…

    • 665 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    One foggy night I was with my friends. We just got done eating around 11:00. So we went outside real quick to get a smoke and we saw legs running through the alley as we walked out. We looked around for a minute because we were all suspicious. We didn’t know who it was or what it was all we know is we heard a loud yelp. But then all the sudden we looked down at the dumpster to a find a image in the dumpster. We all screamed in fright, we didn’t know what to do then we saw a girl running up and down the alley. We looked down and there was blood running down the dumpster this time. The legs were still dangling down. We thought we might have known the person but then we came to a conclusion that it wasn’t her. All that we know is the murder is a girl.…

    • 482 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    One night Lynse, Sophia, Macy, and I were hanging out. It was around 10 o'clock when we decided to go outside and jump on the trampoline. When we got out there we were having so much fun. We were doing flips and playing games, just doing our normal thing. After awhile all of a sudden, we all heard this noise. Right, next to Lynses house there is woods and cornfields so it made it more creepy. Then we all looked by her shed and we saw this huge shadow. We didn't know what it was but our first instinct was that it was a cat but it wasn't. Again it made this noise and we knew that it was a raccoon. We all went to grab our phones to call her dad but we forgot that we had put them under the trampoline for light since it was so light. We were all nervous to get…

    • 495 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    Listen, I’m not saying that this was some type of ghost or supernatural thing. I’m just going to say that this is an experience that legitimately freaked me out and continues to terrify me every time I try to sleep in my own bed at my father’s house.…

    • 677 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    We were in there for about an hour, hearing screams, thuds, and cackles. We were to scared to talk to each other. I was crying, and I wasn’t sure if Stori was since it was pitch black but according to the little sniffles I heard, I assumed she was. I was about to fall asleep, when I heard everything get silent, then the door creaked open, it was a dark but I could see a little and from what I saw there was no one standing there. We waited a few minutes, then I Exclaimed,…

    • 807 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Sometimes you would hear footsteps, on other occasions you could hear faint screaming at night, or even whispers. The parents just brushed it aside and claimed that the house was old and creaky and at night the wind creeps through the house causing the screaming and whispering noise. As for the footsteps, everybody just pretended not to hear those. One day though, Sarah followed the sound of the footsteps. It lead her to the basement. Sarah didn’t feel too well about that place. It was dim, and dark down there and it always felt damp. “Hello? Is anybody there?” Sarah asked nervously. Nobody answered. Then out of nowhere an ice cold breeze flew through the air and left the room in a few seconds. That was all Sarah needed to actually believe that her and her family were not alone in that house. She ran up the stairs and went to find her sister to tell her what had happened. When Sarah found Sally, she was reading a book on how to get rid of ghosts. “There is something in this house,” she said. Sarah then tells her about her experience and they both start…

    • 1158 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    As I lie in bed that night I found myself twisting and turning unable to fall asleep, when I heard the loud screech of the screen door opening. I quickly sat up in bed listening to see if somebody was in the house when I heard what sounded like light footsteps walking towards my room. I pretended to be asleep just waiting for the potential intruder to come creeping into my room. I watched the doorway, but nobody ever entered. That is when I felt a light press on the bed beside me as if someone had just lied in my bed. I quickly rolled over to see that nobody was there and fell asleep thinking that I was just going…

    • 993 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    As we approached the front porch we could feel the eerie chills in the air. We walked through the front door and at first everything seemed normal, but after we had all crossed that initial threshold of the front door the house had hold of us. The door slammed shut behind us and locked all on its own, we were trapped inside… We quickly started to panick, looking for an escape. As we were searching for an exit the strangest things started to happen. We would see shadowy figures turning around corners, just to find no one there, bugs seemed to appear out of nowhere then scurry away, the eyes on paintings seemed to follow us as we ran through the house, and lastly the noises, they came from somewhere deep within the house and had no explanation. Each experience slightly more terrifying than the last; it was almost as if the house could sense our fear and was feeding off of it… Eventually we all ended up succumbing to fear and we just crippled over and gave in, the house had won. All of the legends and horror stories we had always heard about the house were real, today we discovered that they were true. The house had won, it had claimed its newest souls and feasted on their fear until nothing was left but the bones of its…

    • 517 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    “Honey!!” I yelled if what might of happened. I opened the door and pulled the blanket cover. She was there but she was whiter and thinner . I realized it she was disappearing. Not knowing what to do I suddenly heard a knock on the door. “Herbert!” I said in relief I ran downstairs to inform him but what had happened before made me think.…

    • 647 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Its dark and so silent that I could hear a penny drop. However, there’s screeching every few minutes. I can feel a person staring at me but there isn’t anyone there. The lights flicker and I hear a woman scream down stairs. Echoing in the dead silent house in less than a minute. I feel this warmness rush through me and my heart rate has accelerated. My breathing is heavy and I am trying to quietly move down stairs. I feel my hand become saturated with something goopy. My eyes widen as there is a man with dark clothing and something covering his face. He has a knife with bright red fresh blood at the end of the stairs. “You are next,” his deep crisp voice states as he walks out the door. I am unable to move. I am shaking and my chest has this overwhelming pressure. I fall and go blank.…

    • 663 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Scary Persuasive Essay

    • 480 Words
    • 2 Pages

    Once I was home at about 12:00 Everyone was asleep except me, I couldn't wrap up my head to make me sleep. When I was trying attempts to make me sleep, until heard something coming from the kitchen the noise just started, when I tried hard to go but I was afraid of the noise coming from the kitchen, when i finally got brave but it took me 5 minutes to decide and went to go to get a flashlight and crawl on the floor. I turned on the flashlight and checked the the whole house and saving the kitchen for last, after searching the whole house the noise was still going I got to the kitchen seeing the dark creeping on me giving me goosebumps, I could even feel my fear crawling on my back.…

    • 480 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    It was a dark spooky Halloween night, I had just finished watching Spookley, the Square Pumpkin. After a long night of handing out non-poisoned candy to weird staggering tots at my doorstep, I felt it was time to turn off the light. Walking to my room, I tripped on something slimy, being dismissive, I labeled it as my long lost sweater and threw it in the hamper. The corridor to my room seemed longer than usual this night, my steps seemed louder, offbeat almost. I quickly looked behind me, no one was there. Picking up my pace, the steps sounded closer, faster. Detecting my room door, I flew in and shut the door. with my back turned towards it. I’m panting, out of breath. Turning away the cover to my bed, I saw it. It was…

    • 485 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    It was dark, cold and silent. I went back into the building for my cheer shoes i left in my locker, i felt people staring but i know the only thing looking at me was the silent emergency lights at the exit signs. When i walked i felt someone walk behind me but it was only the sound of me not picking up my feet. When i finally got to my locker i couldn't open it, the number turned into letters and i started to panic in even a faster pace, Got it! I snached my shoes as fast as i could and slammed my locker, all the noise went back to a windy black silence.…

    • 253 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays

Related Topics