actions. How to Tell a Strong Thesis Statement from a Weak One 1. A strong thesis statement takes some sort of stand. Remember that your thesis needs to show your conclusions about a subject. For example‚ if you are writing a paper for a class on fitness‚ you might be asked to choose a popular weight-loss product to evaluate. Here are two thesis statements: There are some negative and positive aspects to the Banana Herb Tea Supplement. This is a weak thesis statement. First‚ it fails to take a stand
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constantly captivated me and inspired questions‚ and I found delight in having my questions answered‚ always wanting to learn more‚ from fundamental particles‚ to atoms and molecules‚ to organisms‚ planets‚ and the universe... Could replace your opening statement As a kid I remember being fascinated with magic. The mystery that shrouded most magic tricks bewildered me to an extent that I accepted a false reality. For a brief period of time I had accepted the idea that magic was some talent that only a few
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STATEMENT OF PURPOSE l I did very well during my undergraduate studies at the prestigious R. V. College of Engineering‚ Bangalore (www.rvce.com) securing the 7th rank among 2000 mechanical engineering students in the Bangalore University. As part of the curriculum requirements‚ I worked on the analysis of Wildhaber-Novikov gears for defense applications. The project was adjudged as one of the best projects in the college and was awarded maximum marks during evaluation (for a description please
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STATEMENT OF PURPOSE Before‚ the connotation that peace and diplomatic affairs should only be handled by world leaders and diplomats are very strong. However‚ as I was studying the different nursing and health concepts during my university years‚ realization dawned on me that health care professionals can also play a major part in peace-making‚ peacekeeping and peace building efforts. This belief was strengthened when I read “Peace through Health” by Arya and Santa Barbara. Given extensive and
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STATEMENT OF PURPOSE “The ladder of success is never crowded as you go on the top” are the words of Napolean Hill‚ which I have believed and clearly lived by‚ my entire life. Management is the field which I have aspired right since my childhood. I have been planning‚ setting goals and achieved them‚ in the management from minor to major aspects of my life. Conceptualization of business ideas & new technology has always been a great fascination to me. Achieving a Masters degree
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Alex Mason Personal Statement University of Toronto Computer Science When I was kid‚ I was always interested in science and technology and science was probably my most favorite subject back in elementary school. I’ve always been deeply interested in computers and knowing how they work and it all started with my dad‚ introducing me to the computer systems at his work place that first sparked this interest. I can always remember the feeling of wanting to know
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My home has been a place where‚ in order to receive what you truly desire‚ you must earn it and nothing may be taken for granted. My family has taught me strong moral values and ethics such as being loyal‚ honest‚ and to be a positive role model with a passion for life‚ and I always took that to heart. Growing up‚ I was incapable of participating in most of the activities my friends were able to due to my families financial issues and
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Mission Statement- Assignment- 11/6/13 Home Depot said that they are: “Delivering Winning Solutions That Inspire Worklife. That for them means: - our actions speak louder than words. We are accountable: doing what we say we’re going to do efficiently and on time I would amend this to state that Home Depot Is committed to their customers satisfaction to
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STATEMENT OF PUROPOSE My purpose for seeking a bachelor Degree in Istanbul aydin is to expand my knowledge of theory and research methods as it pertains to education. I especially want to fine-tune my research skills as I feel that the importance of gaining research skills is imperative to becoming a lifelong learner and developing intellectual self-actualization as I prepare myself for a career in Education. I realize the importance of gaining credibility among my future colleagues and people that
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STATEMENT OF PURPOSE Brief Introduction 1. I am a computer engineer who has worked for Five years in the field of information technology. My work experience includes 3.5 years in IBM as Senior System Engineer followed by 1.5 year tenure in TIBCO Software India as technology consultant. The job profile was of a low/middle level manager with primary focus on technology application. 2. I got married on Feb12 and shifted to Chicago alongwith my husband after leaving the job. My husband is working
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