Third Person Narration

This is a good start for a draft. Even though the story uses third person narration, it sounds as if the readers are in Adam’s head. The narrator has sarcasm in their tone, adding to the feeling that this is a close third person. It caused me to see a connection between the two. An example is when the narrator says “like he achieved some life goal” (6). Also, the story contains realistic elements, especially Adam’s brooding attitude and how his whole family. Adam is the strange one in his family.
However, as the story goes on, his brooding nature turns into pure aggression. A part that shows this is when “Adam shoved Claire off the door handle and hissed “I get front.”” (4). His action is unexpected and made me hate Adam’s character. I already