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Personal Narrative: My Major Influences In Life
One of My Major Influences in Life
Who helps you and is always there for you? For me it is my mom, Pam, because she has helped me through the ups and downs of my life, for all 13 years. Pam has lots of knowledge on many topics one of which is volleyball. She played for 26 years before I was born. She took 12 years of my life off until I finally asked her to be my coach. Pam Newberry has shared her wisdom and experience with me by being my coach, being an amazing parent, and having a positive outgoing look on life.
To begin with, Pam has shared her extensive knowledge about volleyball with me by being my coach. She helps me because she can talk to and get through to me in ways others can’t. For example, If I am not doing well and unhappy in some way or about something whe can just yell my name and I most of the time realise what I need to do. She also expects more from me because she knows I can do it. She also pushes me to do my best even when I am having an off day or even an off few minutes no matter what.
In addition, Pam is an amazing parent. She is an amazing parent because she is caring constant and fair. She is caring because when I am sad or getting down on myself she picks me back up and cares about how I am doing in school and in sports.
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Pam Newberry has shared her wisdom with many people including me, her daughter, by being an extraordinary coach and a loving parent and also by having a very positive outlook on life. Pam met my dad Aaron at 27 they dated for about a year until my mom said yes and let my dad married her. One reason I play volleyball is because this is how my parents met and they were both number 13 that's now my number. On October 3rd my parent will be married for 19 years. Pam shares what she knows with many but for me she has touched my life in more ways than one. I hope she will continue to turn me into a daughter that is one she and my dad can be proud of

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