Narrative Essay On Alyx's Mistakes

It was nice and crisp day at the ball fields. Alyx was up to bat with the tying run one third. There was 2 outs and she has a 3-2 count with the bases loaded. She sees the pitch coming in. She’s thinking, “I can do it, I can do it, Hit, Hit, Hit, Hit.” She swings and misses. That's it. Alyxs team has lost the championship. She's upset. That was her worst at bat all year. She wanted to be walked or get a hit, but no, she failed. As she was holding back her tears her team meets in the locker room. She has a talk with the coach then they all go home. On the way home her mom is doing what every mom does. Telling their daughters how great they are and that there's always next time. Alyx ignored her and just wanted to say shut up. The whole team
The semi-final, the game that will get us to the championship. It's the first inning. Alyxs team is winning 3-0. She goes out into the field to take her position. Of Course she is playing center field because that is her normal position. She makes a amazing diving catch to end the inning. At the top of the 7th inning Alyx is up to bat. Her team is still winning but not by much. It's 5-4. THe bases are loaded. She Loaded and Strided and there it is. The perfect pitch. She nailed it to outfield. She starts running and it gets by the left fielder. She is happy the next 3 runs score. She is running too third and she forgot to touch it. She went back to touch but her legs didn't turn, just her body. She felt the searing pain into her leg. She is throbbing in pain. She is taken of the field and runner comes in to sub for her. She is carried off the field and her Mom comes running to her side. Her father gets the car and is ready to go to the hospital. This tragedy shakes up Alyx and her team.Alyxs team lost the game and was already getting started for next year. After the practice the night after the game, Shelby came with the whole team to see how Alyx was doing in the hospital. Alyx told