Preview

How To Write A Moment Analysis

Satisfactory Essays
Open Document
Open Document
1470 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
How To Write A Moment Analysis
Nick Eigenheer
ENGL 1121
January 23, 2013
Weihe
Moment Analysis My heart sank as we heard about the terrible news. We knew it was bound to happen sooner or later. The longer it took for us to find our names; the harder it became to flip through the pages. We flipped to where our department was located and my heart nearly stopped. The page was more blank than expected. Two names remained on the page that was once filled with dreaded long hours for the upcoming week. There it was, my name, all by itself next to a co-worker of mine. Whatever it was I was doing; I was doing it right. It was just another morning at Majestic Oaks Golf Course and there I was arriving before anyone else. The parking lot was empty and not a single sound could
…show more content…
I have talked to my coworker, but we haven’t thought of what could be going on. Maybe there was really nothing to worry about. Everything was still just as normal. We were given a letter after a shift one day. The letter was thick and heavy. I had no idea what it could as it seemed important. My coworker and I couldn’t wait to get home to open the letter to read it. We went and sat down in the restaurant to read our letters. We joked about how we needed knew work uniforms and how maybe we were getting a raise. Of course we joked about how we were being fired. We unfolded the letter. The papers were still warm from the printer. As we started to read the letter to ourselves we both started to read sentences over again. Almost like we didn’t believe what we read the first time. The letter confused us more than anything. The letter explained that a new company would be taking over the golf course. We weren’t sure to be excited or fearful. We walked straight from the table to our manager. She said she didn’t have much information herself. She slowly explained that there would be a meeting for all employees later in the week. She spoke in the tone as she did months ago. It was almost like we reminded her of a terrible incident that was nearly

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Satisfactory Essays

    In Friend Grief and 9/11: The Forgotten Mourners you'll learn how they adjust to life without their friends and find ways to honor those they lost on a clear, blue…

    • 82 Words
    • 1 Page
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Better Essays

    We have been told that in the final assessment there is hope for change; this story tells in intricate detail just how these two lives were remarkably…

    • 1099 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Better Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Jane Doe Research Paper

    • 176 Words
    • 1 Page

    From then one, Jane supported herself throughout college, earning a 4.0 GPA. She started her public accounting career with XYZ Company and excelled as a team leader until the firm imploded in May 2002. At that time, Jane was eight months pregnant with her first-child and is experiencing professional identity crises. Jane stood…

    • 176 Words
    • 1 Page
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    I read your story and there was a few things that hit me throughout this passage. A few of them being the sense of honesty and humility you hold, the honesty towards the people you work with and the general awareness and involvement to those you got to share this time of your life in close relation with. The genuine interest you expressed towards your co-workers truly assisted in the theme of community being portrayed by you in the narrative.…

    • 275 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    One story from a survivor, a first grade teacher Kaitlin Roig-DeBellis states “I did what anyone would have done," she says. "That was my responsibility. I'm their teacher. That's my job."(Sandy Hook School Massacre “i will not let that day define me”). That day she saved all 15 of her first graders in a tiny bathroom stall where barely anyone could breathe. Nearly three years after that day, Kaitlin Roig-DeBellis, has written Choosing Hope to help others…

    • 660 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    The morning before Nikki Giovanni’s speech a terrible event had occurred, when a student at Virginia Tech starting shooting fellow students. This shooting spree lasted for about two hours and by the end there were a recorded thirty-three deaths including the shooter. After this shocking event so many students and families were crying over friends, family and loved ones. Nikki Giovanni, in the speech “We are Virginia Tech” in 2007, addressed the Virginia Tech students fear and sadness. The speaker uses repetition, imagery and point of view in her speech to bring listeners in and to also help people through these rough times.…

    • 531 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Powerful Essays

    I repeated these words to myself as I looked in the mirror wondering how I could tell Yolanda, Martin, Dexter, and sweet little Bernice… Oh, Bernice! She had just turned five less than a month ago. How could I tell them their beloved father has been shot? How will they understand? Yolanda was the oldest and the wisest. There is no way I could sugarcoat this. I slumped down behind the bathroom door and took a deep breath. What originally began as a day filled with strength, service, and self-reliance had now ended filled with despair, disbelief, and damage.…

    • 1260 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Powerful Essays
  • Good Essays

    I never thought me, of all people, would experience such a sorrowful day. I have tried to forget it time and time again; but the reality is I will always remember every miniscule detail, moment, word, and facial expression on that particular day. My heart managed to shatter into a million pieces, leaving me without a reason to pursue my existence. My salty tears freely rolled down my warm cheeks, causing my eyes to burn sensationally. I remember mourning on the comforting shoulders of my family members, as they too were consumed by their feelings. The most valuable lesson that beared a reservation in my spirit was to cherish every moment and loved one, for tomorrow is not guaranteed to anyone. I wish I could have fathom this reality before the climactic tragedy struck me like a ton of bricks. Although death is normal, it seemed almost foreign when it abducted the life of my favorite uncle.…

    • 1141 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    It was unusually cold on this morning of September 11th, 2001, and my alarm had just went off. The odd but needed 5 am. was when I woke up, because my flight was going to leave around 8:30 and I needed to be there on time. The reason I was flying to San Francisco was I was having a family reunion with my dad, my step-mom, and my step-brothers. So, I jumped in the shower quickly with joy and excitement. I hadn't seen my family in forever since I had gotten a job as the assistant of the manager in Ralph Lauren Headquarters. I had just gotten my hair dried as I heard my phone ring. It was dad, making sure that I was on my way. I talked to him for a few minutes and then hung up. I glanced at the clock and realized…

    • 256 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    9/11 Reflection

    • 807 Words
    • 4 Pages

    In March, my mom was laid off from her position as an office manager of a travel agency. The agency closed its doors shortly after September 11th, 2001 as a result of the dramatic decline in business. I did not know it at the time, but my family would be tested by the impacts of the events that left America…

    • 807 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    You’re walking down an exceptionally populated street on your way home to your family. You start to cross the street at a stop light when suddenly you hear…

    • 569 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    This was a very interesting article and gave me some goose bumps. I feel for the death of all victims and their families. I learned from this article to always focus on what’s going on around me at all times.…

    • 250 Words
    • 1 Page
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Practicum Paper Format

    • 677 Words
    • 10 Pages

    I sincerely dedicate this narrative report to my Family and loved ones, especially to those who tirelessly supported me upon accomplishing my on-the-job-training, to those who became my inspiration to pursue the everyday workloads and complete it, And above all to our ever loving God, who’s always there giving us His unconditional love.…

    • 677 Words
    • 10 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    I decided to go out to the front desk and ask Mrs. Hawkins, the manager of the gym, if she had seen any of my teammates. If anyone would know where they were, she would. When I asked Mrs. Hawkins if she had seen them she gave me this look that I will never forget. Her whole facial expression had changed from the looking like she was pleased to see me, to a look of sympathy, and sorrow. And she said to me, "You don't know?" " Know what?", I replied. And she told me that last night Desmond Bowden had a heart attack. All my friends were at the hospital with him and his parents.…

    • 583 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    The Narrow Escape

    • 1186 Words
    • 5 Pages

    As I sat down reading a novel and watching my grandchildren, I observed how things have become so different from when I was their age. My mind started to wonder back to the General Strike of 1958. My palms started to sweat and I started to tremble as I recalled the events of that memorable day. I decided to relax and pick up the newspaper in which I saw that it was the anniversary of the trade unions. I was being reminded at all points of this life-changing event and it was starting to take place all over again in my mind.…

    • 1186 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Good Essays