Editing Exercise: Faulty Parallelism Practice in Correcting Errors in Parallel Structure When two or more parts of a sentence are parallel in meaning (such as items in a series or words linked by correlative conjunctions)‚ you should coordinate those parts by making them parallel in form. Otherwise‚ your readers may be confused by the faulty parallelism. Rewrite each of the following sentences‚ correcting any errors in parallelism. Use your own paper. 1. We must either raise revenues or
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concepts; the “City of Peace” and the “City of God.” Although history has proved the “City of God” to be true‚ the former has rarely occurred for continuous decades. Jerusalem is constantly a city in dispute‚ where even the age of the city is an example of this concept. Jews consider Jerusalem’s history to start 3000 years ago when David established the city as capital of the United Kingdom of Israel. Palestinians‚ believing they are the descendants of the Canaanites‚ say the city is 5‚000 years
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City of God Essay City of God takes place in Rio de Janeiro‚ Brazil. More specifically in a sprawling slum‚ or favella referred to as the City of God. This is a derisive name‚ as the audience learns‚ in that this is a place certainly devoid of anything to do with religion‚ peace‚ or tranquility. The main story revolves around Rocket‚ a well meaning young man who grows up in this chaotic world. Rocket has plans to escape the city by becoming a photographer‚ even though he has normal teenage problems
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City of God (2002) is a crime/drama film‚ which presents the lives of underprivileged youths residing in a favela in the shadow of Rio de Janerio; Cidade de Deus. The film’s protagonist‚ Rocket‚ provides the voice-over narration‚ providing a portal insight into gang warfare which has divided the favela. Author and cinematography‚ Blain Brown’s book Cinematography: Theory and Practice: Image Making for Cinematographers and Directors‚ catalogues various cinematography techniques utilised in filmmaking
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The first factor which allowed Rocket to escape the allure of gang life in The City of God was simply his conscience; from a young age‚ even before he was able to fully understand the concepts and politics behind organized crime and violence‚ Rocket was not able to stomach the life of crime that his brother had chosen. Rocket continuously chose to stay behind when his brother would commit crimes with his gang; I believe that the violent death of his brother subconsciously validated his decision to
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significant role in the social and economic development of every city. Movies and films use various settings to reflect the planning and structure of different regions in the world. For example‚ the film City of God by Fernando Meirelles. It focuses on the social network in a planned community intending to undergo restructuring after experiencing a natural disaster. The movie shows the impacts of poor organization and design in a city. The concerns are evident in the lifestyle‚ setting‚ and characters
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City of God The movie “City of God” is a very interesting story‚ based on a true story in Brazil in the city of Rio de Janeiro. There are two young men growing up in a very poor neighborhood‚ one young man is named “Rocket” which he is a photographer who takes pictures of what is going on in his town‚ crime‚ drugs‚ gang violence‚ etc. He wants to become to the most famous photographer in the world. The other young man is named Ze Pequeno‚ he is a drug dealer‚ who tries to become the infamous drug
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self-esteem because they believe that the edited images show what they ought to look like (Clay). The link between body image and self-worth is evident‚ as is the link between photo-editing and self-esteem. In 2011‚ the American Medical Association urged the media and businesses to stop retouching models and editing photographs so heavily. They warned “we must stop exposing
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BMC-III PAPER-II (EDITING) CONTENT No. Lesson Writer Vetter 01 Editing- An Introduction Sh. M. R. Patra Sh. S. K. Singh 02 Principles of Editing Sh. M. R. Patra Sh. S. K. Singh 03 Qualities of Editorial Staff Sh. M. R. Patra Sh. S. K. Singh 04 Responsibilities of Editorial Staff Sh. M. R. Patra Sh. S. K. Singh 05 News Room & News Desk Sh. M. R. Patra Sh. S. K. Singh 06 Editing Process Sh. M. R. Patra Sh
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History of editing: In the first years of film‚ editing wasn’t used as it is today. When film first came about‚ people mostly used films to make actualities. Actualities mean a short film of an actual event. For instance‚ a ship pulling into the harbour‚ or a train passing by. These films didn’t have much of a story. However‚ it wasn’t long before films made by the Lumiere Brothers‚ and the Edison company‚ contained a plot. (include a little about plot vs story here) These filmmakers would set
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