Demonstration Speech How To Make My Perfectly Pipeable
Betsy Elrod
Jenna Walters
311
Demonstration Speech Video Assignment
Upon completing my demonstration speech on how to make my Perfectly Pipeable Buttercream Frosting I knew that I could have done better. I was worried about timing and got jumbled. In saying this, I do not think that my speech was bad. There were things I did well on and some that I did not do so well on. I am moderately okay with the way my speech turned out. I believe that my introduction was possibly the strongest part of my speech because that is where my passion was. I spoke about my Grandmother whom I looked up to until she passed away. Her passion is my passion and I work hard to be as wonderful as she was. I made myself credible by explaining that I have used this …show more content…
I listed the ingredients without hesitation, but had a few mistakes when I was going into too much detail at that time. I specifically noticed this in two places, when I was talking about the vanilla extract being clear and the possibility of needing the milk. I used phrases that were sort of awkward or unclear, such as when I said, “possibly you could use.” I should have said, “you could possibly need to use.” I incorporated my visual aid into my presentation in two ways. I had my two demonstration cupcakes set out on a table next to the cake box that had my business name on it. I used an unfrosted cupcake to explain how to frost a rosette onto the cupcake as my first use of the visual aid. I then showed the finished product of the rosette by holding up an already decorated cupcake. I had another plan for my visual aid by ran into a complication the night before. I believe my delivery went well. I got everything that I wanted to say out within my time frame. I stumbled over some things a bit, but tried to not let it bother me too much. I feel like I sped up and slowed down a bit during my speech. My audience seemed generally interested in what I was saying and I believe that I kept their attention. It also helps that I had 20 cupcakes waiting to be
Jenna Walters
311
Demonstration Speech Video Assignment
Upon completing my demonstration speech on how to make my Perfectly Pipeable Buttercream Frosting I knew that I could have done better. I was worried about timing and got jumbled. In saying this, I do not think that my speech was bad. There were things I did well on and some that I did not do so well on. I am moderately okay with the way my speech turned out. I believe that my introduction was possibly the strongest part of my speech because that is where my passion was. I spoke about my Grandmother whom I looked up to until she passed away. Her passion is my passion and I work hard to be as wonderful as she was. I made myself credible by explaining that I have used this …show more content…
I listed the ingredients without hesitation, but had a few mistakes when I was going into too much detail at that time. I specifically noticed this in two places, when I was talking about the vanilla extract being clear and the possibility of needing the milk. I used phrases that were sort of awkward or unclear, such as when I said, “possibly you could use.” I should have said, “you could possibly need to use.” I incorporated my visual aid into my presentation in two ways. I had my two demonstration cupcakes set out on a table next to the cake box that had my business name on it. I used an unfrosted cupcake to explain how to frost a rosette onto the cupcake as my first use of the visual aid. I then showed the finished product of the rosette by holding up an already decorated cupcake. I had another plan for my visual aid by ran into a complication the night before. I believe my delivery went well. I got everything that I wanted to say out within my time frame. I stumbled over some things a bit, but tried to not let it bother me too much. I feel like I sped up and slowed down a bit during my speech. My audience seemed generally interested in what I was saying and I believe that I kept their attention. It also helps that I had 20 cupcakes waiting to be