One Day When You Speak Rhetorical Analysis
Proverb: “Things are not always what they seem.”
1. What did you do well? Elaborate on why you think you did well on these aspects of your speech.
What I believe I did well on was link the proverb with the speech and told a story that relates to it. The story was about how I tried skydiving for my first time, and was nervous for it. But after doing it I ended up liking it. Also I believe I did well when it came to looking at my note cards. Only looking backs at it a couple of times and always tried to make eye contact with the audience.
2. Proverb: Did your audience learn something meaningful about you due to your choice of proverb? Was your proverb connected to a personally relevant story? I believe my audience learned something about me from my choice of proverb because I explained in detail about why I chose this proverb and what was running through my mind leading up to the event. They also learned about my fear of heights. Yes, my proverb was connected to a personal relevant story because I was going to try something for my first time and it seemed different than I thought it was. …show more content…
Quality of the narrative: Was your storytelling strong and interesting? Was it easy to understand? How strong was your narrative compared to other speeches you heard this round? I thought my storytelling was interesting because not a lot of people experienced skydiving and I explained how the nervousness factored my view about skydiving, for strong I feel I could of done better by adding more to it like how I felt during the skydive and how I felt when I landed. It was easy to understand I kept the story organized in order of events. I felt mind wasn’t as strong as other speeches some of the speeches really engaged with the audience by asking them about questions and some speeches related to the audience by having very similar
1. What did you do well? Elaborate on why you think you did well on these aspects of your speech.
What I believe I did well on was link the proverb with the speech and told a story that relates to it. The story was about how I tried skydiving for my first time, and was nervous for it. But after doing it I ended up liking it. Also I believe I did well when it came to looking at my note cards. Only looking backs at it a couple of times and always tried to make eye contact with the audience.
2. Proverb: Did your audience learn something meaningful about you due to your choice of proverb? Was your proverb connected to a personally relevant story? I believe my audience learned something about me from my choice of proverb because I explained in detail about why I chose this proverb and what was running through my mind leading up to the event. They also learned about my fear of heights. Yes, my proverb was connected to a personal relevant story because I was going to try something for my first time and it seemed different than I thought it was. …show more content…
Quality of the narrative: Was your storytelling strong and interesting? Was it easy to understand? How strong was your narrative compared to other speeches you heard this round? I thought my storytelling was interesting because not a lot of people experienced skydiving and I explained how the nervousness factored my view about skydiving, for strong I feel I could of done better by adding more to it like how I felt during the skydive and how I felt when I landed. It was easy to understand I kept the story organized in order of events. I felt mind wasn’t as strong as other speeches some of the speeches really engaged with the audience by asking them about questions and some speeches related to the audience by having very similar