Preview

Buying My First Car

Better Essays
Open Document
Open Document
875 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
Buying My First Car
Eric Gance
Creative Writing/2
Mrs. Sosan
9/29/12

A Bit of Memoir

We rounded the corner and there it was, the stout, perfect looking black Jeep Cherokee that my dad and I had just driven and hour to look at. It looked like every other one that I had seen in pictures, but there was the feeling that this one could possibly be mine.
The week before, I had been furiously searching Craigslist and Jeep Forum classifieds looking for a Jeep, particularly a Cherokee with low miles, little to no rust, and the right price, between the years 1997 and 1999. With the tight guidelines that I had for the car, it made it hard to find one. However, acquiring a Cherokee was only the first part; I had many plans once I had one of my own, plans to lift it and put some big mud tires on it, along with some other jeep essentials. My friend had his lifted Cherokee for a few months, and I had wanted one just like it for quite a while. After calling up multiple private sellers and used car dealerships, I had found one not far from me. A used car dealership had three Cherokees, all with low miles, and relatively fair prices. My dad and I decided to go check them out, with the hopes of being able to talk the salesman down a few hundred dollars. After driving a half hour or so, we arrive at the dealership, and there, parked in the front three spots were the jeeps. We made our way over and I was instantly checking them all out, making sure that I kept my cool. The salesman comes out, a big guy who looks like he could be on steroids, and he and my dad started talking. Instantly, like any used car salesman, he goes right into telling us about how awesome these Jeeps are, that they’re in perfect condition. We had narrowed down the three jeeps to one, and naturally we wanted to take it to a local mechanic. Most people would have no problem with this, but this guy did. After he refused to let us take it to our mechanic, we were turned off. In addition, he had given us a price

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Good Essays

    Cars tend to break down at the worst possible times. Sometimes they will break when you are on your way to an important meeting or when you are running low on money. This gets very frustrating and the older your car gets or the worse you take care of it, the more often this will happen. There is however a fairly easy solution to this. If you learn the basics of how a car works and what kind of care it needs then you can keep it in better shape and keep money in your pockets.…

    • 697 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    After landing in Colorado, I had to take a light rail to baggage claim. Then I met up with my grandmother and grandfather. When we left the airport, the first thing I saw was a giant bronco with red eyes. After we got off the highway, we went…

    • 584 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    Quite a few car manufacturers have created models similar to this mid-sized truck but still the Chevrolet Colorado LTZ with Z71 suspension and four-wheel drive is the biggest bang for your buck when it comes to smaller trucks. Many individuals say the truck is almost worthless when it comes to being an actual “pick-up” truck. Some say the cab and/or the truck bed is too small, others will tell you that the 3.7 liter engine is just plain silly when it comes to torque and horsepower. Then again, there are people out there that will tell you that all of those things can be put to great use and that just because the truck is small does not mean it is at all worthless.…

    • 915 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    As we approach I now notice the gentleman is propped up on a crate. His legs are crossed and appear to provide the perfect support for his resting arms and hand holding a sign “Homeless Veteran.” Is this crate what he carries his belonging in? Does he have belongings? A moral dilemma begins to erupt within myself. Am I intruding as I peer at him as he encounters each vehicle? Am I interrupting a private moment? Am I invading his spotlight? My eyes are drawn to the ground as I notice a crisply folded, unwrinkled Chick-fil-a bag placed at his feet. His boots are so dust-covered it looks as if it has replaced the black all over. His pants are an unassuming grey-like green. They are modest and seem to serve their purpose without extravagance. His demeanor is calm and quiet. His movements are soft, subtle, and seem to only be executed as a sign of necessity. Without hesitation, the car pulls…

    • 577 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    It might just be an ordinary photo shoot inside the jeepney, however one must scroll down the pictures of this beautiful creature and ask themselves, is this reality?…

    • 152 Words
    • 1 Page
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    It was a beautiful summer day. Not a cloud in the sky and the sun beating down on anyone under it. It was a perfect day to call over my friends and have an adventure or play ultimate Frisbee like we did almost any day. Today, my neighbor and I, Paul, decided to change things up for a change. We decided to use my homemade go-kart on the abandoned golf course, Blue Heron, behind my house. We grabbed our helmets and took brushed the dust off the go-kart from years sitting in my basement garage for years and were on our way to the long steep hills that Blue Heron had to offer.…

    • 1084 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Its engine running, our getaway car waited in the pickup lane with our dad holding the back door open. We ran and dove in. Dad jumped in the passenger seat, slamming his door closed as…

    • 192 Words
    • 1 Page
    Good Essays
  • Better Essays

    Wise Car Buying Process

    • 1138 Words
    • 5 Pages

    Buying a car is one of the most important decisions a consumer will make. Consumers will often feel overwhelmed when going through the car buying process. Being educated on the process is arguably the most important factor of getting the biggest bang for your buck. Car salesman are not looking out for the consumer. Their only objective is make the most money off you as possible. When car buying the consumer needs to remember three wise tips. Be educated on the haggling process, know which buying process is the best for you, and determine if there is an actual need to purchase the car.…

    • 1138 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Better Essays
  • Good Essays

    Today is the day we are starting our trip. We have our wagon train ready to go now it's time to leave this crazy city. I have my oxen pulling my prairie schooner everything is going well until I bump into a fancy Conestoga wagon. The wagon wasn't to badly damaged, there was just a scratch, but the owner made me pay him sixty dollars. I almost knocked him out but I didn't want to start off our journey that way. Our first day we had plenty of problems including the little accident earlier we had to dump some of the tools we doubled up on because of an over load issue. I was mad as the dickens because I was looking forward to using those tools. They costed us a pretty penny as well. We made camp after 25 miles for the day. We made a horse shoe…

    • 536 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    My first car was a bit of a roller coaster, I had just learned to drive the year before and now it was time for me to have my own car. I would say the excitement I felt was overwhelming but even that might understate it just a little. The search began on a Sunday morning we went to several different dealerships, in search of the right mix of economy and style. Well, to be honest my mom was mostly interested in the economy part. The first dealership we went the car salesman seemed like the kind of over eager vacuum salesman you see on those old TV shows. The guy was just ridiculous, with his hair slicked back, and his slacks which were so tight he could start a fire. Every time he would show us a car I thought he was going to start a fire.…

    • 840 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    About Your Car

    • 839 Words
    • 4 Pages

    In the novel, A Long Way Gone, a young boy by the name of Ishmael is forced to become a soldier at a very young age. He becomes involved in drugs and violence, stripping him of his innocence. Towards the end of the story, he is turned over to UNICEF and put into a rehabilitation center to recover from the horrors he had experienced. This relates to human trafficking; both issues involve children’s innocence being taken from them at a young age. Both groups deal with violence, tragedy, and drug use when they are very young. Trafficking of children leads them to living a life as an adult due to the sexual and physical interactions they may have with customers and those living with them. Both groups of children experience events that most adults don’t even live through every day of their lives.…

    • 839 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Powerful Essays

    I am usually an honest person, who doesn’t like any person or persons being dishonest with me. I feel that, perhaps I made each salesman a little bit better in their approach and techniques, while servicing me. I had asked more question to them about their own salesman abilities and found out I was just dealing with “rookies”. Therefore, I really enjoyed performing this “natural observation” in several different ways. First, I really liked not being “preyed upon” like I was a human, unsuspecting animal with deep pockets. In all cases above, dealerships “A, B & C,” did show me some respect, because I initially told them of my buying plan. Each dealer reacted differently, but each gave me the space I needed to make my OWN decision on selecting my choice of vehicle. I also found out that all types of car salesman at these “pristine” dealerships basically have no formal training or none at all. Does this mean all the qualified people have given up because of this poor economy or have they just changed jobs? Another one quality I did like was that no dealership ever pressured me to “buy today”. I have purchased vehicles from dealerships before and was taught to never let a customer off the lot until you have them in the grip of your…

    • 2612 Words
    • 11 Pages
    Powerful Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    My Car-Personal Narrative

    • 357 Words
    • 2 Pages

    The time when my fifteen year old daughter wrecked my car. On this day I had a doctors appointment so I decided to pick Brittany up from school and take her with me. We arrived at the doctor's office on time, now keep in mind it's cold in most doctor's office, so I suggested that if she got cold she could go set in the car so I gave her my keys. The nurse called back to see the doctor, Brittany remained in the waiting area. Twenty minutes had pasted and the nurse was knocking on the examination room door, I stated "come in", the nurse opened the door and Brittany was standing there looking like she had seen a ghost, she was shaking and crying, however, she didn't make a sound. By this time I'm nervous and really need to know what happen. Brittany couldn't speak the nurse went to get her some water to com her down. I started thinking what could this child have done in twenty minutes of being out of my site.…

    • 357 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    Personal Research Essay

    • 1939 Words
    • 8 Pages

    Immediately, when I turned sixteen I woke up in the morning and saw a pair of shinny silver keys sitting on my desk. I jumped up with excitement and rushed out the door wearing only my boxers, with the keys dangling in my hand. There it was: my brand new GMC Envoy, dark hunter green with a wax that could blind you. I stared at the car with excitement and admiration; it was the most beautiful thing I have ever seen, and it was mine. I took it for a test drive around the block and opened it up on the highway only three blocks from my house. It had a V8 under the hood, black leather seats, a Bose sound system and enough horsepower to tow anything I desired. After my first test drive around the neighborhood, I picked up the phone and called my friends. I couldn't wait to show off my new car. With a quick thank you and a hug for my parents, I sprinted out the door. Hearing a faint be careful from my mom in the background, I slammed the front door and raced to my car.…

    • 1939 Words
    • 8 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Our family car was a very reliable bronze Nissan Murano, this car had been part of the family for at least 5 years, it had taken us to Mcdonald’s trillions of times. However much we loved this car for it’s design, it would not save us from what was in our fates on that particular day. My mom, brother and I were on our way to one of my friend’s house and he lives approximately 15 minutes out of California, Missouri if you take the highway. We were driving approximately sixty miles per hour and we just about to turn onto my friend’s road.…

    • 872 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays