************************************************************************* Smarthinking’s E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing Smarthinking’s OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! Hi‚ Patrina! I am Esperanza C.‚ your E-structor for this session
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narration impact on the way readers understand characters and events in the novel?” In the novel‚ The Great Gatsby‚ written by F.Scott Fitzgerald‚ the author presents to the reader the narrator of the story Nick Carraway. Carraway’s first person narration gives the reader an inside view to the characters that as a third person narrative the reader would normally not have. Nick’s personal relationship with each character makes him biased towards them all in some way. When the reader is first introduced to
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to emphasize how terrible war is. Lines eleven and fourteen give gruesome pictures of the aftermaths of war‚ “trampling the terrible corpses – blind with blood‚” and “his face is trodden deeper into the mud.” This is done because the poet wants the reader to have a clear mental image of how grisly war is‚ and also remember what it results in. Using blood and corpses to paint images had a strong effect on stressing the brutality of war. Glory of Women conveys its message very well because of the ways
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renowned Elizabethan Age. He is very much known for his brilliant essays. Altogether he wrote 58 complete and one fragmentary essay. These essays are based upon a rational world of stark realities. It is pure logic that leads the reader through their precepts and instructions. As soon as the reader starts reading an essay‚ realization dawns on him that he is in the presence of a superior wisdom. OF FRIENDSHIP. Bacon’s essay ‘Of Friendship’ was written at the request of his friend Toby Matthew
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Commentary Essay Purpose: The purpose of commentary is not simply to report things but to give readers a way to make sense of them. A commentary will help you write critically about a topic and will help you analyze this topic within a larger societal context. Audience: Your audience for this paper should be one who has a stake in the topic. For example‚ if you are discussing your understanding of a topic like ISTEP testing‚ your audience could be administrators. Genre: For this paper
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include evidence of her reasoning. Also she fails to explain the negatives that come with social networking sites‚ which may include becoming addicted to creating fantasies‚ stalking others‚ and putting your life in extreme danger. Stites opens her essay with a few of the online communities she is involved with. She explains how before she even brushes her teeth she checks for notifications on her sites. Stites then turns to her phone to check where people were the night before. It is her opinion that
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and Information Science) Annual Examination‚ 2012 Time : 3 Hours SET–I Full Marks : 80 fdUgha ik¡p iz ’uksa ds mÙkj nhft‚ A lHkh iz ’uksa ds vad leku gSa A Answer any Five Questions. All questions carry equal marks. 1. 2. Write an essay on functions of Library. iqLrdky; ds dk;ks± ij ‚d fucU/k fyf[k‚ A Write notes of the following :— fuEufyf[kr ij fVIif.k;k¡ fyf[k‚ %& (i) (ii) 3. Library in Recreational Activities ¼euksjtukRed xfrfof/k;ksa esa iqLrdky;½ a Library in Cultural
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Pre-writing Graphic Organizer Topic: A girl whose parents wants her to attend a private school but gets bullied because she isn’t a city person‚ she’s a girl from the country. She loves to barrel race with her best friend. She just wants to be back at her old school with all her old friends. She uses her horse as a safe place to get away from everything out on the Great Plains. Generating Ideas: Wakely goes to private school‚ doesn’t tell anyone she is bullied. Her best friend Serina can
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2.Is my thesis effective? * I believe that my thesis statement is very effective. * 3.Have I included enough details so the reader can visualize my experience? * The details included in my essay should give the reader a clear view on my experience. * 4.Are the events presented in a logical sequence? * The events included in my essay are presented in a logical sequence. * 5.Have I used transitions to help the sequence of events flow smoothly? * I have used
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Definition Essay Below is the definition essay assignment due on Tuesday‚ January 15. If you would like a word document that you can save as a separate file‚ the link can be found here: Definition Essay. Every word in our language has a meaning; however‚ not all words or concepts have concretely defined meanings. These are typically what we would refer to as abstract words or concepts. Such abstract words or concepts are often specifically defined in the context of the person using the word
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