Peer Evaluation Section: Giancarlos Casillas (Friend) 1. It’s clear the topic sentence but need to work a little bit on that. 2. Yes. 3. Yes. 4. Yes. 5. Yes. 6. No. 7. Yes. 8. If there are more sources that think the same of you. 9. It is a good paragraph and having this problem is situation that many young people are having and I understand you. I agree. José A. Nieves Morales (Friend) 1. Yes‚ I could identify the topic sentence. 2. Yes. 3. Yes it have. 4. Is ok but considered more clarity on words
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English 101 Descriptive Paragraph 8/27/2013 On April 15th‚ 2013‚ 117th Boston Marathon took an ugly‚ sad turn for the worst. I am a reporter for Channel 7 news; I was scheduled to cover the Boston Marathon this year a job I wasn’t too thrilled about since I had no interest in the story. Little did I know this story would change my life and be the most horrific story I would ever cover. I gave the runners some time to cool off before I made my way to the winners to get an interview
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Lengua inglesa 3: Writing Introduction paragraphs for comparative essays I. Comparison of the theories of K. Marx and S. Freud: Karl Marx and Sigmund Freud are obviously two of the most influential thinkers of modern times. Both developed enormously important and comprehensive views of human nature and society‚ theories which have exerted a major and continuing influence on the way we think about ourselves and our fellow citizens. Of particular importance for us are the views of these two thinkers
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Great Gatsby Analysis Paragraph F. Scott Fitzgerald‚ in his classic novel The Great Gatsby‚ illustrates the American class system in three different categories: the “old” rich‚ the “new” rich‚ and the “not” rich. He shows how each class tries to reach the American dream and struggles to remain secure in the life inside America. Fitzgerald depicts the only class that survives is the “old” rich. In the first place‚ progressing throughout Fitzgerald’s novel‚ he derives that Tom Buchanan is inside
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Romeo and Juliet – Literary Paragraph In Romeo and Juliet‚ each character has a specific role and for the main character‚ Romeo‚ seems to be the one who changes the most. Romeo changes throughout the play as he is constantly become mature. As Romeo’s thoughts‚ feelings and actions have revealed his great changes among all other characters. According to the play‚ Romeo presented three palpable changes as the followings‚ he gets over Rosaline right after meeting Juliet‚ his hatred towards Tybalt
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III. Paragraphs to explain memorable literary devices/ key images/quotations. * Imagery of Wounds (Symbolism‚ Imagery‚ Allegory) From the moment the boys land on the island‚ we begin to see signs of destruction. Over and over we are told of the “scar” in the scenery left by the plane. The water they bathe in is “warmer than blood.” The boys leave “gashes” in the trees when they travel. The lightning is a “blue-white scar” and the thunder “the blow of a gigantic whip‚” later an “explosion”
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COMPLETE THE PARAGRAPH WITH WORDS FROM THE BOX YOU SHOULD TAKE INTO ACCOUNT SEVERAL THINGS WHEN YOU ARE 1)...................... FOR A JOB. A GOOD LETTER OF 2)................ IS VERY IMPORTANT‚ AND DON’T FORGET TO ENCLOSE YOUR 3)........................SO THAT THE 4) ................KNOWS ABOUT YOUR 5).................... AND YOUR 6) ....................IF YOU HAVE AN 7).................... WITH THE PERSONNEL MANAGER‚ REMEMBER TO ASK ABOUT 8)................... AS WELL AS 9) ...........
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Serbia: Unwind In Serbia’s Most Visited Spa LEAD PARAGRAPH Vrnjacka Banja (Spa) is the oldest and commonly regarded as the most beautiful spa in Serbia. Vrnjacka Banja is located in central Serbia‚ 25 kilometers (15 miles) from Kraljevo on the Kraljevo-Krusevac road. The spa town boasts an exceptionally beautiful environment and pleasant climate‚ and is visited by domestic and foreign clientele in need of various medical treatments. PARAGRAPHS Vrnjacka Banja overview Vrnjacka Banja is located at
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Carex wahuensis The Carex wahuensis is a green leaf like plant that grows as its sedges grows sharp on the outsides and turns sharp enough to cut a finger running up against it. It grows about 2.5 feet in height. It lives about for 5 years and is native to Hawaii. It grows fuzzy like flowers that have seeds inside. The Carex wahuensis is a native plant to Hawaii‚ the leaf blades can drop down and reach four feet. It’s okay to touch the plant‚ but be careful‚ it has sharp blades as its leaves‚ the
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that it would take 5 weighings as described by the equation for an unknown item value: However‚ this is an overestimate as there is a way to determine the lighter of nine items with only two weighings. This was overlooked in the last POW (Eight Bags of Gold). Nine items can be weighed by dividing into three sets of size three. Comparing two sets together would determine which set contained the lighter item. With the last weighing‚ one can determine the lightest item. This raises the limit of
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