Peer Evaluation Section: Giancarlos Casillas (Friend) 1. It’s clear the topic sentence but need to work a little bit on that. 2. Yes. 3. Yes. 4. Yes. 5. Yes. 6. No. 7. Yes. 8. If there are more sources that think the same of you. 9. It is a good paragraph and having this problem is situation that many young people are having and I understand you. I agree. José A. Nieves Morales (Friend) 1. Yes‚ I could identify the topic sentence. 2. Yes. 3. Yes it have. 4. Is ok but considered more clarity on words
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Zinn 5 Paragraph Essay In “A People’s History of the United States‚” by Howard Zinn‚ Zinn states “To emphasize the heroism of Columbus and his successors as navigators and discovers‚ and to deemphasize their genocide‚ is not a technical necessity but an ideological choice. It serves-unwittingly-to justify what was done‚” this quote is true to all extent. True‚ Columbus and his followers founded Central America‚ but they were obviously not the first or the “native” Americans would have not been
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Lengua inglesa 3: Writing Introduction paragraphs for comparative essays I. Comparison of the theories of K. Marx and S. Freud: Karl Marx and Sigmund Freud are obviously two of the most influential thinkers of modern times. Both developed enormously important and comprehensive views of human nature and society‚ theories which have exerted a major and continuing influence on the way we think about ourselves and our fellow citizens. Of particular importance for us are the views of these two thinkers
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My first year at York University was a very difficult one due to circumstances that significantly hurt my ability to perform in school. During this time I could not work to the best of my ability because of problems at home that involved both of my parents. My parents would argue almost every single day and this affected me emotionally and mentally. These issues slowly began when I was in the twelfth grade‚ and then progressed rapidly throughout my first year at York University which affected all
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Section 2- Multi-paragraph Are We Raising the Morally Illiterate Kids? We are raising morally illiterate kids? I am agreed with her thesis. This is the main thing she is telling in her thesis and also she has used many persuasive techniques like alliteration‚ point of view‚ emotional language‚ ironic situations etc very effectively. In today’s world‚ most of the children are not aware of morally teachings. They are lack of them. They don’t know how to behave with elders‚ with their fellow students
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Romeo and Juliet – Literary Paragraph In Romeo and Juliet‚ each character has a specific role and for the main character‚ Romeo‚ seems to be the one who changes the most. Romeo changes throughout the play as he is constantly become mature. As Romeo’s thoughts‚ feelings and actions have revealed his great changes among all other characters. According to the play‚ Romeo presented three palpable changes as the followings‚ he gets over Rosaline right after meeting Juliet‚ his hatred towards Tybalt
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AAJ TAK’s News Channel’s Success Story ------------------------------------------------- Price: | Case Code | : | BSTR097 | For delivery in electronic format: Rs. 300; For delivery through courier (within India): Rs. 300 + Rs. 25 for Shipping & Handling Charges------------------------------------------------- ThemesDifferentiation | Case Length | : | 14 Pages | | Period | : | 2000 - 2004 | | Organization | : | TV - Today Network | | Pub Date | : | 2004 | | Teaching Note
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through our academic years we were taught how to write. Starting with elementary‚ when the form of writing was first introduced‚ it consisted of compositions with simple prompts about our weekends. Now‚ that there was an idea of how to write‚ middle school English teachers began teaching students a writing format. This format is commonly known as the five-paragraph essay‚ which consist of an introduction‚ three supporting body paragraphs‚ and a conclusion. The five-paragraph essay began being strongly
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schools in Jakarta until he was ten years old‚ when he returned to Hawaii. Obama majored in political science and international relations at Columbia University in New York. After four years in New York‚ Obama moved to Chicago. There‚ he worked as the director of a community project from 1985 to 1988. He entered Harvard Law School and became the first black president of the Harvard Law Review. Obama taught law at the University of Chicago Law School for twelve years. He became an Illinois Senator in
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euphoric memories of the Indian cricket fan. And then down came MS Dhoni’s willow‚ the uninhibited swing resonating with the momentous occasion‚ and the white ball streaked through the night sky‚ soaring over long on‚ into the ecstatic crowd. After a 28-year wait‚ India had won the World Cup. MS Dhoni launches Nuwan Kulasekara into orbit to give India the 2011 World Cup © Getty Images Dhoni had been having a less than ordinary tournament till then. Every move of his had been mercilessly criticized
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