What is the editing stage? The editing stage is when you check your essay for mistakes and correct them. Editing Steps: Grammar and Spelling 1. Check your spelling. 2. Check your grammar. 3. Read your essay again. 4. Make sure each sentence has a subject. 5. Make sure your subjects and verbs agree with each other. 6. Check the verb tenses of each sentence. 7. Make sure that each sentence makes sense. Style and Organization 1. Make sure your essay has an introduction‚ supporting
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Title of the Book: THE BIG RACE Author: Francine Pascal Setting: At Secca Lake Characters: Mr.Wakefield- husband of Mrs. Wakefield Mrs.Wakefield- wife of Mr.Wakefield Steven- was the twins’ older brother Elizabeth- Jessica’s twin sister Jessica- Elizabeth’s twin sister Mrs.Otis- the twins’ teacher Ken- player of soap-box derby Andy- player of soap-box derby Eva- player of soap-box derby Todd- player of soap-box derby Character I Like Best: The character I like best is
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Big Fish Part 1 – Characterization I feel what motivate Edward is that he has so much background and he has met so many people. He starts by being a kid- he saw his death into a witch’s eye‚ spent 3 years growing due to growing up too fast. He grows up doing so much for a lot people‚ talking to people. Grasping new stories to hold and hearing new ones he has never heard before‚ adding them to his memory. I feel this is what motivates him to tell his stories a certain way. What motivates Will to tell
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Heinrich Muller head of Gestapo Heinrich Muller was an interesting man‚ even though we do not know much about his work with Gestapo. Gestapo is the German secret police. Gehemie Statspolize is a German word that means secret state police‚ which is where we got the word Gestapo (Smelser 59). Although we do not know much about him or what happened to him after the war‚ Heinrich Muller was an unusual and mean person. Heinrich Muller’s childhood was like most kids‚ but some things were unusual
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Caravaggio’s David with the Head of Goliath Caravaggio’s David with the Head of Goliath is a truly important picture expressing art’s underlying paradigm‚ every painter paints himself‚ in a clear and unmistakeable way. It was reported in the mid-seventeenth century that both heads‚ Goliath’s and David’s‚ are self-portraits at different stages of life though David is described as “il suo Caravaggino”‚ or in English “his little Caravaggio.”1 This clearly refers to how Caravaggio painted himself when
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“Big Brother Big Business” by David FaberSummary Big Brother Big Business takes a disturbing look at how the growth of the information society may be deteriorating the freedoms many people take for granted. More than ever before‚ technology is being used to monitor Americans. Driving habits are being documented‚ personnel are monitored‚ shoppers and patrons are observed and analyzed‚ and Internet queries are saved and utilized as evidence in the courtroom. It is Big Business which gathers the
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A Look at Heritage and Culture In Canada‚ there is a lot of mixing of cultures; many people are the third or fourth generation of immigrants. They were born and grown up in a different society where they have few reminders of their own heritage. In the poem “What I have left is imagining” by heather MacLeod and “Ancestors-The Genetic Source (adapted)” by David Suzuki‚ Both of these authors feel that they are separated from their culture. However‚ heather still feels connected to her homeland‚
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Associate Program Material Appendix J Quoting‚ Summarizing‚ and Paraphrasing Sources |Summarize: |This article is about what people think of legalizing marijuana. The amount of people wanting marijuana to be | | |legalized is climbing more and more every year. The age and sex of a person is most likely the determining factor of | |Be brief. |the person’s answer to the question “should marijuana be legalized?”.
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Globalization: A Closer Look After several decades‚ General Motors decided to move shop to Mexico. Causing high impact on local culture‚ huge impact on the United States‚ thousands of people unemployed and on unemployment. Causing at least two states‚ Flint Michigan and Mesa‚ Arizona to lose money in the process. Global stratification affected the local culture in Flint‚ Michigan and Mesa‚ Arizona in a huge way. The negative effects it had on both of the states not counting the other states
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his titration‚ Dr. Sweeney would have observed a slight change in color from colorless to pink that lasts at least 30 seconds and does not fade away. The desired end point in a phenolphthalein titration is “a pale pink tint that persists for 30 seconds.” It took Dr. Sweeney 24mL of NaOH to reach his endpoint. 4. HClO4(aq) + NaOH(aq) NaClO4(aq) + H2O(l) 5. This is an acid-base reaction (neutralization reaction). Neutralization reactions involve the reaction of an acid with a base to form a
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