The Legend Of Hope: A Narrative Fiction

Once there was a bongo named Hope, he is a pretty quiet kid, he likes the outdoors and is pretty tall. Hope is not that popular in the 7th grade, he gets bullied by an piano named Bryan, he is 12 years old but 13 in a month. Hope is going on a camping trip. He didn’t want to go at first, but now he is excited. Hope is going to Pali camp, a camp in the mountains. Hope is on the bus sitting by himself and he is almost there.
The drive was 3 hours, everyone was tired and Hope’s friend Calvin, a short guitar that is 11 years old was talking to him. “Soooo, what are you reading?” Calvin says. Hope replies,”I am reading Flute Potter.” The bus starts slowing down. “What the?” Hope screams.”The bus is out of gas, let me put the extra gas
Calvin backed off and told Hope to get close. Hope got close and the portal started to suck in matter and Hope got pulled into the portal.
“AHHHHH” Hope screamed. “ I will get you!!!” Calvin screamed. Hope lands in a tree and is lost somewhere far away Calvin and the bus. “Ugh, where am I?” Hope questioned. Hope looks around and starts following a dark cobblestone path that looks sketchy. After a while of walking through a quiet forest that gave Hope the chills, Hope saw a black blur between the lifeless trees.”What the... is that..a..CASTLE!?!” Hope exclaimed. Hope runs forward, ignoring the path running through trees scratching himself so he can see this magnificent building. “What is a Castle doing in such a dead, barren place like this?” The castle was black, grey with a red hue coming from the inside, like it was alive and evil. A human comes out of the castle telling Hope to hurry and come inside before something happens to him. The man came from a back entrance, though like it wasn't there before. Hope quickly ran inside from fear of the dead forest. The man takes Hope to a cottage full of people. The man says, “You are scratched, what caused