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Steroids: Dorm Life Vs. Home Life
The essay “Steroids and their effects” is the most effective, logical, and persuasive essay between “Perfect day” (Definition), “Dorm life vs. Home life” (Compare and contrast), and “Steroids and their Effects” (Causes and effect). The essay “Perfect day” uses facts, logic and an appropriate tone. It also uses hypophora, “Is the term ‘Perfect day’ therefore lost? No,”. However, there is a lack of depth in the examples. In addition, it has poor use of essay structure and conventions; There were no indentions. The essay contains very simple diction, and lacks creativity. In addition, it has basic facts and example, and very few stylistic techniques. Therefore, the essay was not effective nor persuasive. The essay “Dorm life vs. Home life”
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