1. My first essay is about negative affects of peer pressure on teenagers..There are certain things i go on about in my essay i wish i could have said better, or more things i would have like to compared towards peer pressure.For example, in my essay i would bring up a lot of thing about peer pressure leading into sex half of the stuff i said makes me fell like it could have been pharsed better. Personally i fell there could have been more evidence to back up my stance for sex during peer pressure. Also,i felt i could have blame more issues then drugs and alcohol. 2. One thing i can notice about my second essay is that the ad i had chosen for my report was something that had interest me. Software for people who like to play games and i always considered myself and “avid” gamer so i chose that specific ad sense i’m a gamer. Reading over my essay i wish there could have been a little bit more information i could add like the prices in the ad for the merchandise the company was selling other than that simple thing i’m pretty much satisfied with the essay like i said there are some aspects that could have been better but overall pretty good. 3. N/A
4. Going over everything i did and some i attempted to do there are thing that i could have done to make my portfolio better. I wish i had done my othello essay and pride and prejudice essay it would have made a big difference in the quality of my writing portfolio. I’m just hoping that my portfolio is good enough because i think there’s a pretty good amount of effort that when’t into overall quality of the portfolio. One last thing i would improve on is turning in my essay on time so my teacher can grade it and not have to deal with me everday.
5. The most important thing i learned not just in english 12 but life as well is to push yourself harder and put a lot of effort into thing. 6. Just trying to deliver my work on time and put effort into my work when i do attempt to do...
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