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It was the 7th-grade year and everyone knew me well. One day, when I came home from school, there was no one there. Creek. Crack. Squeak. Squeak. I heard many small noises in my house. Then as I looked around, all my windows were wide open. There was a huge wind blowing through the air, harder than a hurricane. It felt like an air conditioner in the hot sweaty summer. Then suddenly, “ding, ding, ding!” My phone notification went off. The notification came from a social media app called Kik. The notification came from a new person who I had not heard of. His name was Boshmob. He had the intimidation of a detective and the creepiness of a daddy long leg spider. However, I was staring at four petrifying words that he texted me… “I can see …show more content…
I felt the need to take a shower to get the day started. Eventually, I got out the shower; the fog wrapped around me. Despite that, I walked out the bathroom with the fog still following me. The atmosphere smelled suspicious… ding, ding, ding! I saw the same four petrifying words, they said, “I can see you”, with a smiley emoji by the words. My heart was pounding so hard it shook the walls. I decided to think of another plan, but my heart kept interrupting me. Eventually, as I got creeped out again I felt the need for more help.
Meanwhile, I remembered my friend Jeff had a relative that worked undercover in the FBI(Federal Bureau of Investigation.) Finally, I called Jeff to ask "could they file a case for me since they are an undercover FBI," “sure I don’t mind,” he said kindly. I patiently waited for weeks.
Later that night, I got a call from my friend saying Boshmob been convicted guilty of perjury. All my fear flew out of my body and he was no longer a shadow that lived in my steps. I felt relieved and an exuberance of not having worries anymore, the creepy stalker deleted his account and was later discovered to be one of my friends now

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