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Jake Barks: A Fictional Narrative
“Don’t sound so panicked son, I’m just glad you came back. Baring your soul

will give you peace.”

Peace! Did that man on the cross bare his soul? Is that why he looks so peaceful? Well you are screwed my friend because nothing you do, will ever give you peace.

“Lets get one thing straight,” Jake barks. “There is no peace for me”

“Maybe not for you, but maybe, for someone else.” This time, the mans

words have Jakes brain screaming at him to leave, but never look back.

For some reason he still doesn’t leave.

“Whatever!” Jake snaps. “You don’t make any sence to me. Let me do

the talking and you do the listening,” Jake snaps again as he wipes

sweat from his for his for head. He takes a few moments to stretch out his

legs,
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“All that was missing, was me

wearing a suit and tie.” He lets out a soothing humming sound as he opens

his eyes and drops his hand.

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“It was beautiful.” He streaches out each word for affect. “After cutting her

limbs off, I cut the rest of her up like a Thanks giving turkey that nobody would

ever eat.” He chuckels to himself. “I even dumped her body parts off at

Gable Park. The funny part about that was, I got to sit by my bedroom window

with my bino’s and popcorn and watch the cops work the scene. Those

dumb asses didn’t even have a clue on how close the killer was.” He adds in

an excited voice, wiping away some more sweat as he ends his story.

“Damn! Is it always hot in these tiny rooms,” he grumbles.

“It’s not hot on my side,” the man comments back. “Maybe you’re feeling the

heat from hell creeping up on you,” the man’s voice sounds way to calm

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