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admission essay
Abhayjit Singh Nov 10, 2014
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Admission essay

I picture myself in 20 years or so as a famous architect. The way I could achieve this goal is by going to your school High School Of Math, Science And Engineering. The classes that will help me achieve this goal are your architect programs. The reason I would like to go to your school is often in my childhood I liked to play with Legos and dynamic designs with them. The attributes I posse are Leadership, willingness to take risk and special abilities. These can be proven because when I was eight and I was visiting my cousin’s house, he had friends over and they were building a replica of the Twin Towers. The only thing was it was being made out of popsicles and way tinier then the real thing. They were almost done building it when it collapsed. They all got mad and decided to try again, as they were building it they made the same mistake, then I didn’t want to make them even more mad so I squeezed into the group and took down 20 sticks. My cousin got mad that I took it down, I told him that it would have fallen down again if I didn’t take those sticks down. They understood and said sit over there, pointing to a chair next to him and to point out when they should take down some sticks. This for me was a huge risk for me because my cousin and his friends aren’t the soft guys there tough, he probably would’ve yelled at me more than enough after they left. After I had done that with my cousin I realized I wanted to grow up and design buildings. I also realized that the world doesn’t have that much modern design to them because all famous structures are either old or don’t have a nice design to them. I think this because most famous buildings have the old dusty color to them and aren’t

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