Peer Review On My Argument

The peer review feedback that I chose to incorporate into my argument was clarifying my point of view. I never clearly stated which side of the argument I fell on. She suggested that right after I explain my topic, I should clearly state what my point of view is. I incorporated this into my argument because after my peer pointed out that my point of view was never clearly stated, I decided to take a break from my paper. I needed to come back to it as the audience instead of the author. When I came back to my paper and read it from the audience's point of view, I realized she was right. I needed to make clear what my point of view was; because if the audience has to make assumptions about what side you fall on it will be hard for them to believe