Organ Donor Death Raise Questions About Living Donors Analysis

The article was written by Gillian Mohney who is a writer in ABC News.com which is a famous article in America. This woman has a large knowledge in many fields including films, fashion social, culture with more than 400 articles, and commentaries in ABC News.com (1). But she still conquers other themes such as health service and “Organ Donor Death Raise Questions about Living Donors” (on April 11, 2012) is that article. Organ donations have both advantage and disadvantage. However, some details in article are subjective evaluation. We should have more multiple perspectives through posts of Gillian Mohney.
The article summaries what is happen around living donors after organ donation operation. Paul Hawks was died while he donating a portion
Lahey clinic did not comment on the case due to the potential litigation once again, this information affirmed carelessness in work from this clinic. At the end of the article, this is a sweet sentence by Lorriane Hawks which wrote on an online guest book for her husband “"My valentine, that twinkle in your eye … I miss you so much. Love, Lorraine,” wrote Hawks. It made the reader not only to be moved but also a confidence for Lorriane Hawks was being prepared a suit against the Lahey
Gillian Mohney who is the author of this article; she had more than 400 articles, stories, blogs, videos and photos in ABC News.com (1) so this fact was affirmed her amount of knowledge and quality from articles. Despite my inability to write fluency but I was greatly interested in this article. In this article, the writer uses concerned language, it is suitable for almost reader in all ages especially elderly and their relative. Moreover, the author gives us the specific judges from CNN and the director in surgeon medical. The author 's opinions are given with to make it both objective and subjective. In addition, some words are quite difficult for reader to understand such as “red flags”, “pre-operation EKG”, “massive blood transfusion protocol” (2), etc. However, it might have been better for the author to have written this article as a commentary with more than comments by yourself about this topic, should have just been two value evidences to make the work more successful.
After reading this article, I think the patient should have a right decision when they want to organ donation. As John Renz said “It’s always a special day when there is a living donor.” so the clinic and the surgeon should have a highest responsibility to reduce lowest a real risk with approximately one incident in every 200 cases (2). Besides, the government should have concessionary for the organ donation