Rubric for a Well-Written Paragraph Categories of Performance: Beginner (1) Basic (2) Intermediate (3) Advanced (4) Tone The tone is inappropriate for the writing purpose. The tone shifts from formal to informal and is not consistent. The tone shifts occasionally from formal to informal‚ or vice versa. The appropriate tone is used consistently. Opening sentence The sentence is incomplete and does not state the main idea. The sentence is complete‚ but does not state the main idea. The sentence
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Paragraph 1 While searching to the internet‚ I have seen that you are looking for someone to hire for the position of Medical Billing and Coder at one of your Phil Health locations. This position is responsible for accurate recording and processing data about patients‚ such as treatment records‚ insurance information‚ bills and received payments. They organize all the patient’s records‚ bills and statements and confirm that they are free from errors before coding information. My friend’s
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Anthony Nguyen September 17‚ 2014 S.S. Island Paragraph A.N. Island The dictionary defines island as “a tract of land surrounded by water and is smaller than a continent”. The one and only A.N. Island was made an official island by Peter Nguyen on December 17‚ 1990. He was traveling on the ocean when he bumped into a piece of rock. He didn’t notice that he had bumped into the Cave of Death until Death Bear came. He was lucky that he had weapons on his boat such as robogun that he had invented
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Period Styles ROMAN Roman Architecture: Roman Architecture has‚ since the Renaissance‚ had a more or less definite connotation: of compelling grandeur‚ planned order‚ fitness to the human eye and to the human situation. It stands today as a testament to the ability and grandeur of this once great civilization that‚ at one time‚ covered three continents. The common style of architecture formed a thread that helped keep the vast Roman Empire connected. The elements
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Argumentive paragraph: The Cowardly Barber In the story‚ “Just Lather‚ That’s All” by Hernando Tellez‚ the barber would have been a coward had he killed Captain Torres because‚ when he killed the captain he was unarmed. Secondly‚ he would have to flee leaving all he had behind. Lastly‚ he would have been vulnerable. The barber was weak and afraid of killing captain Torres and to be called as the murderer of the captain. The barber would have been a coward because; he killed the captain
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stated‚ “My parents were both born in the United States‚ but moved to Germany for work‚ forcing me to grow up there. My dream was to go to school in the U.S.A!” An ecstatic expression then lit up on his face. Due to his home life‚ his dorm truly made a difference in his life. I decided to take a visit to Mitchell North to see this “nightmare” first-hand. The fumes of guys fill the air. Anders lives down a narrow‚ dull-yellow hallway‚ with the community bathroom just outside his door. Next‚ I
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explain in the first sentence. Sometimes it’s explained in the first paragraph depending on the text. That is the reasoning used to choose the very first sentence which is deemed the introduction. After choosing the first sentences the other sentences were simply based off of the order in which the first sentence stated the various situational factors. After identifying the order‚ it was a matter of easy flowing in which the paragraph as a whole would make sense thus giving you
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my house asked do him you want so water “sure evan” I went in got to glasses of water and my basketball we played one on one until Todd and Josh showed up aka the bullies on the block. Josh grabbed the basketball out of Jordan hands and held it up high so we could not get it. Todd said “you want it play a game with us tomorrow at the park at 2:00 pm.” Then he walked a way with the ball I said “give it back punk.” He did not answer me and just kept walking.
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Romeo and Juliet – Literary Paragraph In Romeo and Juliet‚ each character has a specific role and for the main character‚ Romeo‚ seems to be the one who changes the most. Romeo changes throughout the play as he is constantly become mature. As Romeo’s thoughts‚ feelings and actions have revealed his great changes among all other characters. According to the play‚ Romeo presented three palpable changes as the followings‚ he gets over Rosaline right after meeting Juliet‚ his hatred towards Tybalt
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In Mayagüez‚ I learned to speak Spanish‚ and to appreciate and be proud of my Hispanic heritage. My family decided to come back to Falls Church in time for me to start High School. The day I first came with my parents to register in the new school I was impressed with all of the new academic opportunities at my disposal. My new high school offered honors and AP classes in addition to an IB program‚ and several foreign languages‚ all of which my former school lacked. I decided to make the best out
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