criticism on my essays from my TA‚ my professor and fellow students. This semester I was fortunate to receive quick‚ fairly reliable‚ built in feedback. From the feedback that I have received by taking this class I believe that I have become a better writer as it was beneficial for the most part. Feedback that I received from my fellow students was occasionally helpful. It typically varied from week to week. One week I would write a paper and get a ton of markings and criticism on it which was helpful
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When floods develop‚ the places in which they do so are called water sheds. These water sheds can be either man made or they can be natural. A watershed is defined as an area that is between a land mass and a water source. A watershed can be a lake or a river. If this particular watershed is working appropriately‚ then the water should be drained into the ground naturally. However‚ if there is too much snowfall or rainfall‚ then the watershed cannot hold so much water and this results in overflowing
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William Shakespeare impacted literature through his dramatic language‚ imagery‚ and theatrical performances. In a vast amount of Shakespeare’s writings he mastered the use of rhetoric speech and the eloquence of word structure. Persuading an audience and capturing them in the moment was one of the things that Shakespeare was fantastic at; author N.F. Blake said “the implication is that Shakespeare was sufficiently of his time to use rhetoric‚ though he was very conscious how easily it could be abused
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There are three major methods of persuasion‚ pathos‚ logos‚ and ethos. These methods have been used commo until today by skilled writers‚ to persuade readers intoing or idea. In Shakespeare’s play‚ Othello‚ Iago the antagonist‚ Iago‚ applies the methods of persuasion including ethos‚ pathos‚ and logos to prove to the tragic hero‚ Othello‚ of his wife’s disloyalty. There are many ways d in to fill Othello’s mind with images of Desdemona naked with Cassio. This makes Othello’s jealousy grow
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Hemingway’s modernist style of storytelling requires an impersonal narrator. The narrator describes the scene‚ and interjects small actions into the dialogue‚ but remains a facilitator for the reader to concentrate on the dialogue and the action of the story. The narrator in this story seems to tell the story as if it were a video clip‚ a nameless railway station somewhere between Barcelona and Madrid‚ ghostly white hills‚ a faceless waitress and an anonymous couple. The use of this narrator makes
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Ur Saldana Professor Dozier English 1010 23 September 2008 Ms. G and I What life holds for us is determined by how much we are willing to sacrifice. In the movie Freedom Writers‚ Ms. G is the main character. Her way of viewing life gives hope to the people surrounding her. In this essay‚ I am going to compare her willingness to sacrifice with the sacrifice I was once asked to make. Ms. G dedicated herself to teaching a difficult group of students. California had integrated the school system
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dress and her big dangly gold hoop earrings that she wore to work‚ her ruby red lipstick that she always had placed way beyond her lip line. My grandma was very hip; she wore nice clothes‚ not the polyester garb that my other grandma wears. She would do her roots every week with Clairol jet-black hair dye to cover her gray hair‚ which is why her hair had a blue tinge to it. She smelled like Foille‚ a topical cream that she used for her dry arms‚ it smell just like bag balm. Only weighing about a hundred
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my work serious and wanted to become a great writer. Even though I made good grades during my high school years I still had apprehensions that held me back from my true potential. Although‚ I was predominantly successful throughout high school‚ I still had many problems with writing. My confidence in my writing is most of the time very shallow. My lack of confidence comes from the fear of making common mistakes that I usually don’t see because of how often I make them. Most of the mistakes I make
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Introduction The purpose of this essay is to describe an analysis of the film “Freedom Writers” in regards to the breadth area of Social/Civic. The film “Freedom Writers” is based on the area of Long Beach‚ CA‚ was released in early 2007‚ and directed by Richard LaGravenese. The film is about a young teacher who inspired her class of at-risk students to learn tolerance‚ apply themselves‚ and pursue education beyond high school (IMDB‚ n.d.). The film expresses the lives of students in the early
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The primary virtue of How to Read Literature Like a Professor is it’s "duh’ factor. Take this trick question: In a lake‚ there are a patch of lilies‚ which double in size every day. If this patch of lilies take 48 days to cover the entire lake‚ how many days would it take for the patch to cover the entire lake? Maybe you think you know the answer. Maybe you have no clue. But then you hear the answer. That it takes 47 days for the lilies to cover half of the pond. It’s that feeling - that the knowledge
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