Whitney Bennett Jacqueline May English Composition 1 June 20 2015 10 Thesis Statements based on Michael Moore’s Documentary Film “Bowling for Columbine” Thesis #1: The United States have a higher murder rate with firearms than Canada‚ even though Canada have the same amount of guns as the U.S. The violent history of America contributes greatly in the crimes presented in our society. Response: I agree with this because Canada has more gun control than the United States
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Topic: Education (improving inner-city schools; alternative/charter schools; effect of technology on education; importance of early childhood education; improving curriculum/learning; class size/teacher-student ratio; teacher recruitment; improving student achievement/graduation rates; rural school issues; legalizing state lottery to fund public education; gender‚ race or ethnic issues in education) Narrowed issue/problem: The issue/problem with today’s early childhood education is that most
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The Thesis Statement This is not an exhaustive list of bad thesis statements‚ but here’re five kinds of problems I’ve seen most often. Notice that the last two‚ #4 and #5‚ are not necessarily incorrect or illegitimate thesis statements‚ but‚ rather‚ inappropriate for the purposes of this course. They may be useful forms for papers on different topics in other courses. 1. The non-thesis thesis. A thesis takes a position on an issue. It is different from a topic sentence in that a
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best I have ever seen." Thesis Statement * Every essay‚ even a descriptive one‚ should contain a thesis statement‚ which summarizes your argument‚ whatever that may be. It should be contained somewhere in your introduction‚ and usually at the end. In particular‚ if you begin your essay with some startling impressions‚ your thesis statement should clarify what your essay is about and show how you will approach the subject. In the fireworks example‚ a good thesis statement could read‚ "The fireworks
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While reading the title of Sally T. Student’s essay you are immediately asked a question; this question allows for you to think and hopefully become interested in what the author is going to say. However‚ this was not the case while reading Sally’s essay. Sally’s essay continuously leaves the reader confused and asking questions by her lack of organization‚ sentence structure‚ and a thesis statement. Sally’s organization was choppy and unorganized‚ and was filled with detailed sentences left in
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Building the Thesis Statement Creating the thesis for a research paper seems to be the hardest step in essay building. Yet‚ if you can break down the process and purpose of the thesis‚ you can remove all the anxiety and hassle from the start. Here are some few easy steps and pointers on how to make a good thesis statement... but first‚ grab a notepad and follow this easy outline towards creating the thesis of your paper. 1) Topic - What is the topic of your paper about? Is it a theory‚ an analysis
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hiệu trong đề bài: Only‚ the most important‚ some‚ all‚ necessary‚ many Mở đầu: NP…. Brings the negative and positive that lead to wide discussion. Thesis statement: Example 1 Some people believe that it is acceptable for young children to undertake jobs that they are paid for‚ whereas others believe that this is wrong and should be illegal. This essay will discuss both sides of the issue. Example 2 At present‚ more and more young children are becoming involved in paid work. Whilst some people
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Thesis Driven Essay Examples Thesis: William Golding uses symbolism in the form of the conch to represents the concept of society. The boys’ evolving relationship with the conch illustrates that humans‚ when removed from the pressures of civilized authority‚ will become evil. 1st TS: In the beginning‚ the boys view the conch as an important symbol that unites them and gives them the power to deal with their difficult situation. 2nd TS: Gradually‚ however‚ the conch becomes less important
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University of Phoenix Material Thesis Statement and Outline Thesis statement: Even though homeschooled kids learn in a different environment‚ I believe homeschooling is a better option for some children because they become more independent learners and they have higher test scores. Introduction I. Homeschooled kids score higher on test scores A. Test scores 1. Home schooled kids on a national average score higher than public kids 2. Home schooled kids score higher on college tests
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Thesis Statement for Reflective Essays Should contain: 1. Event/ topic of focus 2. Event’s impact on you Example / A friend’s forgetfulness helped me see beyond my contempt of my great grandmother to contempt of myself for loving so conditionally. Are these thesis statements or not?? This past summer’s lesson was perhaps the most memorable one yet. Gazing from across the pasture to the creek‚ I realized that love is universal among earth’s creatures‚ that they all possess the
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