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“A Day Like No Other”
Charlie Gonzalez and her husband Damian Gonzalez have lived in southeast Florida their entire lives a are use to hurricanes hitting there all the time but little did they know this hurricane was gonna be one they never forget. As Damian was driving home the rain fell like rock on the windows and the wind blew like a jet engine before it takes off it was going to be the worst storm yet and Damian was in a rush to get home when he say a man walking in this horrible weather so Damian asked him if he need a ride and the man got in. meanwhile at home his wife Charlie was making a fried chicken dinner her husbands favorite when she was watching the news on TV and the news reporter said that a serial killer was on the loose with a picture of him in the left corner and that when she heard her husband car drive up she turned off the TV so the lighting wouldn't hit it. She prepared the table when her husband came in he said “honey we have a guest for dinner”. When Charlie saw who it was fear ran through her vanes her heart felt like it just jumped out of her chest she could tell her husband didn't know that the man that was in their house was the serial killer that was labeled extremely dangerous. She didn't know what to do so she served them both dinner as she and her husband went to get the desert out of the kitchen she told him who he was his name John Richards a serial killer from South Carolina who broke out of a maximum prison before his execution. Then the lights went out and Richards was gone as they fought for there lives her husband nearly on his death bed she fought Richards with a the force she had she stabbed him multiple times for to die. The neighbor's were dead he had killed them too finally the phones were working she called the police but when she came back Richards was gone. She looked at her husband and said “ don't you ever bring another stranger home or a serial killer will be the least of your problems”. The police had

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