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this is a story of a girl Katty she is sitting alone in her bed crying she is all alone, Im so lost she said I cant seem to fine my way out. I feel so alone in the world right now. This is going to be harder then the first time, but yet is a little different because back then I knew that I had to get over him and I knew it would hurt if I saw him but at the same time I would love seeing him it would take me in to a deep long beautiful day dream and it would be hard to get out. But now it will be hard to forget him because February,9 2013 was get I was in line in a line to find out that my loved one was gone it is the hardest day of my life but enough of all of that let me get to my story it unheard but yet not boring, I a story of two people who were in love there name will be untold…….

It was December 24 1997 Katty was 3 and he was 8 it was the 1st time they had met she was cute and cubby that was he liked about her and ever since that they there were like pb&j always together there were best friend and she will never forget it. Katty and Luis were too young to know what love was but it was always there Luis would always protect Katty, but never knew. That is age is hared for Katty, she have no mom and her dad was broke he had fell in love with his one girl that the world did not know at she was going to be such HOE! SHE would lie and did not love him, but HE did not see the way SHE was because that’s were the love kicked in HE was blinded and HE couldn’t see what happened to poor Katty. SHE would pretend to love her and cared for her but the poor girl would only go threw hell every single day. If SHE wouldn’t get beat her or punish she would have to play game she never wanted with a member of the house is was never fun because was only 3 and he was 53. The only escape Katty had was to be with she felt nice and protected in his arms he would do all he could to keep her way from all the danger that was in her way. Time passed and hand it turned into years everyday will be that same but he would made her forget when she turn 8 that day Kattie was happy and couldn’t stop smiling it was march 10, 2003 the cutest day that could be was the day he had asked her out . It is kinda cute when you think about it. Kattie had never felt so happy and so lucky, but the thing that worried Kattie was what they would do or say SHE would never let Kattie be happy so Kattie had told Luis don’t take it as a joke this is a secret between us both you are 13 and I am 8 THEY would have something to say, r Kattie would always blame it on the age but she never cared about she just didn’t want HER to know about it. Luis respected her diction that is what she loved about him, she would do anything for him as well as for her. He knew everything about her he was a man that knew who to listen would never judged and always knew what to say it kina takes me back to our 1st date he took her to the Lake Park we sat under a tree apart form everyone it was a tree well hidden we got there at 8:20 and left at 9:30 the talked about everything that came to mind the first 2 hours they didn’t he couldn’t get her to talk she was to nervous that anyone would see them and then after a wide he reached for her had when there hands touched that was like a magic spell she forgot about the hole world and her hole attention when to him then the rest of the time he could get her to stop talking I guess he wanted her to stop because he came really close and gave her a kiss but it was only in the cheek she felt like she was floating in a cloud . for a whiel is was all quite they were looking at the tree and everything around them she began to get cold she didn’t say anything about it then she felt his arm go around her and he got close she laid her head in his chest, as he was stroking my hair he had made I me a promise he had told her that he will never leave her and always be ther matter what is. He said I know it our first date but I want to let you know that I love so very much I was looking him in the eye almost wanting to cry he said that we will always be together I told him I don’t want you to promise something you cant keep but I believe and I love you too. He looked at her with a smile in his face and said that kat thank you for saying that but I want you to wait because you are only 8 you really don’t know your feelings and you don’t know what love is about, she said baby hold up wait it dosent matter if I am 8 I know what love is because all I have to do is look into your light brown eye and get lost and I don’t want to get out, when I am with you I feel like I am in the moon I feel like there is no gravity I feel like im floating and I have to hold on to something because I am sacred of floating away we could be in a room with millions and millions of people but when u look at me I feel like its just you and me. so please don’t tell me that I don’t know about love because you will be wrong I have always loved you but if you want I can say that I like you because in evey couple the always say [ ILOVE YOU] but scenes we are more spicel we can say I like you! He smiled at her and said WOW!!!! That is one of many reasons of why I go crazy for you, you are so young but you thing like a big girl I samil and said it help when I with you. The next year when she was 9 it got worst in HER house HE was always working and Luis couldn’t come into the house that made Katty super sad but he would always see her at Lake park. SHE had gotten a new job so SHE wouldn’t be at home the house would be empty just Katty and a family member of HER. Katty it was June 3 2004, when her monthly friend came for a visit HE took advantage the no one was home and he would play game that are untold she would cry on her own and didn’t tell a soul that happened so 4 more years until Luis found out because Katty was crying that her friend wasn’t coming he said don’t worry about it there nothing to fear you have never done anything to for something to pop in your oven and she cryed and he got mad katty is there something I don’t know!! Is there someone I know please don’t tell me you were cheating because I would never believe it she cried and look at his eye babby please you are scaring me you know you can tell me anything so she told the games that were going one and he got mad he wanted to do something about it but she said baby please don’t say a word I promise nothing is going to happened and he said I want it to stop happening with him she became brave she stood up to HIM that every same day she look at HIM and looked in his eye she said touch me one more and I’m calling the cops HE thought she was blushing and got close to her and she called 911 and he backed up since that day he never go close to her or even spoke to her. The next victim was HOE it was, SHE came to the room screaming and yelling she graded the belt and began to swing and SHE hit her 10 time in the back but Katty was getting stronger with love she didn’t even flinch when she said she is a Bitch and look that the devil striate in the eye and told her not to mess with her and more nothing that SHE could say didn’t even hurt she took the belt from her hand and said if you put and had one me I will return the hit, she got close to HER and showed HER it wasn’t a tizz SHE look shocked and a little scared SHE got out of the room and never bugged her again! Katty began to go out and living more happy he began to feel more happy with herself she felt as if that think could happen so she told Luis that she waned everyone to know about there love but she still didn’t want HER know so at a party at the age of 13 it was august 16 2008 he took her to a party it was in Shorty’s house he was Luis’s best friend and he invited people that were close when danced and had a good time until Luis despaired and for a while and Katty got mad because she thought he had left he then he came out he was wearing a tuxes and and a rose on his had and Shorty put a slow song on it was titanic he asked he if she would be his girlfriend she said yes with a big smile and Luis said can this princes dace with the princes as he reached for her hand said yes and they were dancing and everyone else followed them and it doesn’t stop there it was also the day the had there 1st real kiss she was laying on his chest smiling in the moment he turn her around and around and he looked then they looked into each others eyes and he began to get closer and closer when he reached her lips and they began kissing that was the 1st kiss they had ever had she felt like they were floating in the air she have never felt so special now she new what they had was forever form that day one it was like she wanted no one told her what to do. she was with the guy of her dreams and life was good. I memory the shared that she thinks it funny it was January 29 2009, 3 days befor I hear him talking to Shorty that he wish he could fuch a hoe and dumper her ass the next day! I was over thinking about it and I was going to talk to him about it

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