2013
Essay 1 attracted a ‘Credit’. It addresses the task, makes pertinent points and uses references appropriately. The structure, format, expression etc is also of a suitable standard. Suggested improvements for Essay 1 are in ‘red’.
Essay 2 attracted a ‘Fail’. The criteria are not addressed . The language is too informal. English usage is of a poor standard. Senteces ‘ramble’ and are poorly constructed! The attempt at referencing is equally poor, despite attending a session on how to reference.
ESSAY 1
Start with a general statement re the topic as discussed in class---for example-
Special needs education assistants (SNEAs) have a critical impact on the support needs of students with additional needs. To be an outstanding Additional Needs Education Assistant you must have an understanding of the duties required of the position to become successful.. This essay will discuss how important an Additional Needs Education Assistant is to a classroom environment in supporting children with additional needs, what makes them successful and the challenges they will face in their working environment. This essay will also examine the There are a number of professional skills required, but there are also a number of other …show more content…
Sound communication skills ensure instructions are imparted on the student in an understandable manner, which in turn allows for learning. It also makes sure the Education Assistant understands the instructions given to her by the Teacher. Education Assistants have a number of administrative tasks that they are required to complete so they must have sound communications skills. Good communication skills enable good relationships between students, staff, parents and other community members (Competency framework,