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Roller Coaster Narrative
"AHHHHHHH!" I screamed as the roller coaster began climbing up the steep hill. In what seemed to be an eternity the rollercoaster made it only halfway to the top. Looking down below at the pool area I saw people which seemed like ants. Click, Click, Click the roller coaster continues to the top.My heart starts beating faster, my hands and whole body starts to shake and sweat; at this point I know what's coming, I didn’t know whether to hold my breath or to breathe deeply; I panic as I look for something nice, steady and strong to hold me and keep me safe from the fall of death.

Last weekend my family arrived in Primm Valley Resorts in Nevada.Since I only live forty five minutes away I went to see them.The casino they booked a room in was called Buffalo Bills is known for the two huge arcades that range from motorcycle machines to dancing games to shooting, and attractions.One of the attractions in the casino is called "The Vault"a virtual roller coaster that spins, flips and rocks you, and then there's The Desperado a roller coaster with a two hundred and nine foot drop. I meet my family there said hello and I missed you to all of them; then me and my sister head to the …show more content…
"How long is the ride of Hell?" she asked or at least that’s what I heard in my scared little head. "Three minutes." he responds. She looks at me and says "See it's just three minutes you'll be fine ." I respond with "Do you know what can happen in three minutes? He opens the gate and signals towards the roller coaster. The roller coaster was
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