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Name: Kiara Murphy
1st Body Paragraph (Write out 1-6 in relation to the first quotation you have selected from your target essay.)
1.Topic Sentence- In her essay, "Deaths Waiting List," Sally Satel says finding an organ donor is a hard task and to make it easier, proposing initiatives would create a larger amount of organ donors.
2.Signal Phrase- Towards the middle of the essay Satel states, "If we really want to increase the supply of organs, we need to try incentives- financial and otherwise." She also adds that, "Many transplant experts recognize this, proposing initiatives that would allow people to give their organs in exchange for tax breaks , guaranteed health insurance, college scholarships for their children, deposits in their retirement accounts, and so on... the Presidents Council on Bloethics and others, have begun discussing the virtues of such incentives."
3.Quotation from the essay w/Parenthetical Reference- Satel says, "If we really want to increase the supply of organs, we need to try incentives- financial and otherwise." (129. Par. 6) Here in this statement Satel uses logic to prove that if people are given something they would enjoy, In return they will become an organ donor. "Many transplant experts recognize this, proposing initiatives that would allow people to give their organs in exchange for tax breaks , guaranteed health insurance, college scholarships for their children, deposits in their retirement accounts, and so on... the Presidents Council on Bloethics and others, have begun discussing the virtues of such incentives." (129. Par.7) This evidence proves that the Auther is not the only person who thinks incentives should be given and if enough people think there should be initiatives, then it may happen.
4.Interpretation/Explanation & Discussion of the Quotation- If incentives were given out to organ donors the supply of organs will increase. People may not have any knowledge abut being an organ donor and
1st Body Paragraph (Write out 1-6 in relation to the first quotation you have selected from your target essay.)
1.Topic Sentence- In her essay, "Deaths Waiting List," Sally Satel says finding an organ donor is a hard task and to make it easier, proposing initiatives would create a larger amount of organ donors.
2.Signal Phrase- Towards the middle of the essay Satel states, "If we really want to increase the supply of organs, we need to try incentives- financial and otherwise." She also adds that, "Many transplant experts recognize this, proposing initiatives that would allow people to give their organs in exchange for tax breaks , guaranteed health insurance, college scholarships for their children, deposits in their retirement accounts, and so on... the Presidents Council on Bloethics and others, have begun discussing the virtues of such incentives."
3.Quotation from the essay w/Parenthetical Reference- Satel says, "If we really want to increase the supply of organs, we need to try incentives- financial and otherwise." (129. Par. 6) Here in this statement Satel uses logic to prove that if people are given something they would enjoy, In return they will become an organ donor. "Many transplant experts recognize this, proposing initiatives that would allow people to give their organs in exchange for tax breaks , guaranteed health insurance, college scholarships for their children, deposits in their retirement accounts, and so on... the Presidents Council on Bloethics and others, have begun discussing the virtues of such incentives." (129. Par.7) This evidence proves that the Auther is not the only person who thinks incentives should be given and if enough people think there should be initiatives, then it may happen.
4.Interpretation/Explanation & Discussion of the Quotation- If incentives were given out to organ donors the supply of organs will increase. People may not have any knowledge abut being an organ donor and