Thank you for the feedback on my Outline for ME #3. I understand that I should have expounded more on the types of harm created by certain places and events surrounding the ocean, and that I should have supported my argument by discussing regulations that need to be implemented in order to protect the ocean from chemical, plastic, and oil pollution. Anyhow, the reason for this email is that I am thinking about changing my third essay topic to instead discuss the ethics of film director Quentin Tarantino's recent decision to attend and speak at a police brutality rally.
I would greatly appreciate any feedback given at your convenience on the following thesis before I completely change my topic. My working thesis is, “Quentin