Purpose: To persuade my audience that International adoption has its cons but it has a lot more pros.
Central Idea/Thesis: The counter argument of international adoption, fees, what the media makes adoption look like, and the laws about adoption.
II. Attention Getter: The total amount of adoptions in the years 2006 was 17,029.
III. Credibility Statement: I’ve been researching the topic for multiple weeks.
IV. Thesis Statement: International Adoption is a human right for people all over the world.
This is something that helps save millions of children
V. Preview of Main Points: I will be informing you of fee s,what the media makes adoption look like, and the laws about adoption.
Transition: Lets get started with the negative things of International Adoption …show more content…
2.Support: In a news article from November/December 2011 it says, “As news of child trafficking China and Guatemala makes headlines, rumors are rife about the negative aspects of international adoption.” If you noticed how it says rumors, they don’t have any evidence to support the rumor. B. Subordinate point:Decreases Adoption 1.Support:Media exposes have been effective in influencing national policies.
“For example, there have been reports that suggest children from Romanian orphanages were being ‘bought’ resulted in a sharp decline in adoptions from that country.” This was from an article, the year …show more content…
Main Point #4: Laws about adoption A. Subordinate point: Who may adopt from China All information is from the article titled international Adoption Law: A Comparative Analysis from the fall of 2009 1.Support: China has made very detailed and specific laws about who can adopt from their country. In 2007 China made a new adoption policy that prohibited of
Chinese kids. You can not adopt from China if you are unmarried or a homosexual. If you are either one of these you have to state it in the application. 2.Support: Before you are able to adopt from China, a couple must be married for at least 2 years,but only if neither of the spouses have been divorced. If either spouse has been divorced, then the couple must be married for at least 5 years. If both spouses have been divorced they cannot adopt. B. Subordinate point: Who may adopt from Russia All information is from the article titled International Adoption Law: A Comparative Analysis from the fall of 2009 1.Support:While China has announced extensive customs that foreign adopters be married, Russia allows adoption by both married and single