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6F. I feel that my voice was clear when telling them the story. I did have to speed up when I singing the song because I forgot what happen after they ate the bugs. However, I did remember what happen after they ate the bugs and was able to slow down again.

6G. I know my voice was loud for the children because they were engage in the story and the song.
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