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Personal Narrative: My Car Ride
I was speechless, couldn’t think, couldn’t feel. That night was like drowning in ice, with both the coldness of it and the numbing pain that was my thoughts. The only thing I knew was get in the car and wait. Wait for what seems like years. The car ride was like watching yourself slowly die. Every bump, every nook in the rode was nauseating. Watching the buildings pass by had a calming effect, like a stress ball. My mind was a formula 1 car… racing. I didn’t know if my thoughts would crash and stress me out even more but I’m glad they didn’t. Although the car ride was like driving with the devil by my side I made it to the hospital with my thoughts still going.

Earlier that day was like any other, I wake up take that shower that feels like
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