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My Take On The Ride-Personal Narrative
As we are running to the gate of top thrill dragster at cedar point on a hot day the sun directly above us running up along the long path.The bushes and gates all around.My heart pounding thump,thump,thump.The feeling of fear running throughout my body as I hear the the noise of the ride taking off WOOSH!,The loud screams of each person. We were waiting in line among 100’s of people allowing adrenaline to build.The sweat on my forehead from the hot sun. The smell of the popcorn stand at the gate.Watching the gates open with the sound of a creak as we get on the ride. As we wait for the next cart to take off at 120 mph in 3.8 seconds.Our cart moving up to the take off strip. Grasping the handle.Yellow,Yellow,Yellow,Green lights .Taking Off I
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