my father
Descriptive Paragraph Prewriting Template
Step 1: Descriptive Paragraph Prewriting & Plan
Directions: Complete all of the elements of the prewriting; otherwise, the content of your piece will not be accurate.
Topic: My father
Overall Impression/Point: As people age older they change physically and emotionally, however we can always see them as they were before.
Audience: Instructor, Family and friends.
Purpose: Persuade
Topic Sentence: My father changed in many ways over the time, but I always see him as the person he was before.
Your Vantage Point: Personal experience trough my life
Spatial Order: My lovely father, his looks, his words, and command voice of respect.
Brainstorm Sensory Details: Sights: The memories Sounds: His words Tastes: Textures: His face Smells: His cologne
Step 2: Descriptive Paragraph Rough Draft
Directions: Write a rough draft that follows your paragraph plan, beginning with your topic sentence. Do not worry about spelling or grammar; just let your thoughts flow. End with a good concluding sentence that restates your controlling idea or expresses a thought that restates your dominant impression. It must be at least 200 words, no less and not too much more.
My Father
There is many changes of looks when people age, but very often we remember them as they used to be. Thinking about my father, I see him as he was when I was a little girl growing up. He was a strong, hard worker, confident, and attractive men. Many times I remember him getting ready to work while I was growing up, but I usually think of him with his lovely Sunday tuxedo. He had short wavy, dark brown hair and dark hazel eyes. His face was a slightly rectangle oval, which made him look both gentle and strong. He had high, wide big eyebrows and a triangular, slightly turned up nose. I used to sit on his lap to cuddle against his chin and I loved the feeling of his rough face due to his facial hair. He was a tall man, about five feet nine
Step 1: Descriptive Paragraph Prewriting & Plan
Directions: Complete all of the elements of the prewriting; otherwise, the content of your piece will not be accurate.
Topic: My father
Overall Impression/Point: As people age older they change physically and emotionally, however we can always see them as they were before.
Audience: Instructor, Family and friends.
Purpose: Persuade
Topic Sentence: My father changed in many ways over the time, but I always see him as the person he was before.
Your Vantage Point: Personal experience trough my life
Spatial Order: My lovely father, his looks, his words, and command voice of respect.
Brainstorm Sensory Details: Sights: The memories Sounds: His words Tastes: Textures: His face Smells: His cologne
Step 2: Descriptive Paragraph Rough Draft
Directions: Write a rough draft that follows your paragraph plan, beginning with your topic sentence. Do not worry about spelling or grammar; just let your thoughts flow. End with a good concluding sentence that restates your controlling idea or expresses a thought that restates your dominant impression. It must be at least 200 words, no less and not too much more.
My Father
There is many changes of looks when people age, but very often we remember them as they used to be. Thinking about my father, I see him as he was when I was a little girl growing up. He was a strong, hard worker, confident, and attractive men. Many times I remember him getting ready to work while I was growing up, but I usually think of him with his lovely Sunday tuxedo. He had short wavy, dark brown hair and dark hazel eyes. His face was a slightly rectangle oval, which made him look both gentle and strong. He had high, wide big eyebrows and a triangular, slightly turned up nose. I used to sit on his lap to cuddle against his chin and I loved the feeling of his rough face due to his facial hair. He was a tall man, about five feet nine