Music Censorship

Metal Write a draft of at least 900 words that includes your introduction, body, and conclusion. Use the following to write your draft: · Develop an introductory paragraph for your essay. Include your thesis statement in this paragraph. · Use your topic outline in Appendix E from Week Four as a guide to develop topic sentences and appropriate types of supporting paragraphs for the body of your essay. · Develop a concluding paragraph to sum up the main ideas in your entire paper. Avoid adding any new information into the concluding paragraph. · Include appropriate transitions within and between paragraphs. Post your draft essay as an attachment to eCampus.

THESIS Metal music has both negative and positive effects on todays youth.

Paragraph one
In this paragraph I will give the history of metal as well as a definition and a modern discription. I will also give the milestones that it has gone through. I will give the history starting point.

Paragraph two

In this paragraph negative stereotypes and assumpotions of metal music. I will also look at the negative psychological aspect it has on today's youth This will include any bad reports in news, gossip, and printed paper. I will disprove false accusations of metal.

Paragraph three In this paragraph I will state the positive aspect of metal. I will state the good things that metal has accomplished throught its history. I will also give show the positive reports in news, and impact on todays youth.

Paragraph four

This will be the over all impact of metal music, wheather it be good or bad. This will state which side the evidence favors verses popular opinion.

Paragraph five.

This will be the conclusion. This of demonstration of the impact as well as how the positive and negative effects affect people.

Positive effects

even tho due to popular belief there are positive effects to heavy metal music. Those positive effects are