Major Narrative Rough Draft: A Beautiful Raven

Major Narrative Rough Draft

Once there was a beautiful raven. One day, while she was protecting her nest her spouse went out in search for food, but he did not return. The elegant mother was abandoned and force raise her children on her own. Fifteen days later the eggs hatched. There were five chicks; 4 males and one female. The mother raven raise her children well. She taught them to fly, fend for themselves, and find food. As her children grew old the mother raven watched as her children left one by one. Each of them finding a spouse perfect for them. But one did not find a spouse. This Raven’s name was Lily. Eventually Lily moved out. She flew far away from her siblings and mother. SHe flew for days and days across forests, oceans, and deserts. When she settled down to make her home she found herself in what seemed to be Egypt. She still couldn’t find a spouse so she set off looking for something to do. As Lily flew over a very extravagant palace, a strange man called her down. He addressed himself as the Pharaoh. The Pharaoh offered her a job as his messenger which she promptly accepted. Her job was very simple: She was required to send messages on command at any moment from the Pharaoh to any of his people. She enjoyed her job at first and
One she had readied herself for the day she left her home and set out to meet the pharaoh. But, on this day Lily did not fly her normal route to the palace. Instead of going straight to the palace she picked a basketful of berries. Upon arriving at the palace Lily found her friend Abbas to whom she gave the berries. Now Abbas was a good friend and loyal servant to the pharaoh. And he only did what he did because he envied power. Once Abbas reached the pharoah’s bedroom the pharaoh said “Good and faithful servant; fetch me a glass of wine.” To which Abbas responded with “But master, is it not too early for