Thank you for your feed back, I would check again for grammar and editing, I believe there have been some erros. Regarding to share my paper with your educators, I really do not know; what would you suggest Dr. Privitera. This is a topic that I have considered for my Capstone project. I am somehow affraid that someone else copy the study if there is good potential on it. However, I would strongly consider Dr. Privitera's advise.…
Ruby, I didn’t get to read your summary so i don’t know if you were bias or not but i was able to peer review your rhetorical analysis paper, and i would say you did a very good job in that aspect. By reading your rhetorical analysis paper it grab my attention as a reader, you have provided a argumentative thesis on the word “pussy” in which i think that is one of your best strength as writer. I think you did improve as a writer by rader your paper i did see you word choice was appropriate for your audience/readers.Furthermore, if you see yourself struggling on word choice i likely suggest reading it over the part you free it’s weak and if you are using words that are too general then i would said find a signal verb. Moreover, make sure you…
Overall, your paper is well organized and concise. I suggest you to revise some small errors throughout the paper and focus a little more on specifying the author’s intended audience and…
This paper analyzed two articles from different fields of studies, then compared and contrasted them for rhetorical elements. One from the field of criminal justice and the other from the field of psychology. The criminal justice article, “DA Vance: Tyrone Howard Convicted of Murdering NYPD Detective Randolph Holder” was produced by The New York District Attorney’s office (2017). In this article the authors mentions a press release about a man murdering a NYPD detective and how the man lead up to that murder. The other article from psychology, “Personality and Social Psychology: Crossing Boundaries and Integrating Perspectives” was created by two psychologists, Snyder and Deaux (2007). These article mentions the differences and similarities…
* A RHETORICAL ANALYSIS REFERS TO THE PROCESS OF ANALYZING A TEXT, GIVEN SOURCE OR ARTIFACT.…
Through the utilization of passionate diction, depressing figurative language, and deceptive syntax, Anne Morrow Lindbergh describes the benefits and effectiveness of applying oneself to isolation, thus revealing the importance of seeking solitude.…
I have learned to evaluate sources for their legitimacy, relevance, and authority through the Colby-Sawyer’s library website. The library website has a tab on “Bibliographies, Citations, and Academic Honesty.” The website tab provides different kinds of information including: OWL examples of citations, how to avoid plagiarism, how to create and evaluate different sources/citations, and academic honesty. Also by doing multiple of these “how to cite correctly in MLA and APA” exercises really helped me learned different scenarios of how to properly cite an article.…
Mckibben "The Case for Single –Child Families." first appeared in the Christian century in 1998. In this essay Mckibben aims to convince his readers that having one child doesn’t mean that you’re child will follow the single child stereotype, and that the environmental status of our planet will worsen if we continue to have a growing population. "If we keep heating the planet at our current pace, the seas will rise two feet in the next century.” Personal anecdotes, and using and assertive serious tone are techniques McKibben used to develop a convincing essay.…
My chest tightens as I walk in. I sit down and feel dread’s wretched talons claw away at my confidence. I couldn’t help but visualize the internal struggle I had when anticipating and receiving my first essay back in my AP English class as a battle. It was like that of my favorite board game: Risk(whom I was able to enjoy on my iPad thanks to its technological debut).…
A rhetorical analysis essay is a form of close reading that make use of the rhetorical analysis rule to look over interplays between the article, an audience and the article writer. The rhetorical analysis opinion is a way of let us analysis that concentrates on the article itself. Rhetorical analysis method can be use to any kind of references. Such as an essay, a speech, a web page, a poem and so on. When this method use for the book, rhetorical analysis regards the work not as an esthetic think but as a literary work structured for communication. Also, as we known, to fulfill rhetorical analysis requires the writer or the researcher to move outside identifying. I am doing the rhetorical analysis on the article “Getting a Hold on Mechatronics.”…
Dave Chappelle returns to his hometown of Washington D.C. in the year 2000, during his tour around the country, to perform for the people of D.C. During his show “Killin’ Him Softly” Chappelle effectively uses rhetorical strategies by engaging his audience, understanding the culture he is addressing, as well as exemplifying the problem with racial stereotypes and the disparity of police brutality between the African American community and the white community.…
The Pound Cake speech by Bill Cosby a well-known actor, comedian, and Philanthropist delivered a controversial speech called The Pound Cake Speech which was presented on May 17, 2004 at the NAACP Gala at Constitution Hall in Washington, DC. In this speech, Cosby was highly critical to members and divisions of the African American community in the United States. He criticized the use of African American dialect, the problems with bad parenting and various other social behaviors. Bill Cosby was effective in his speech because he combined a humorous approach with an emotional and logical appeal.…
I believe that the rhetorical strategy of narration is both seen differently in the article, “Unnatural Killers”, by John Grisham and the article, “The Case Against College Athletic Recruiting” by Ben Adler. Both appeal emotionally to the reader but one is a lot more logical in its approach then the other.…
Texting and driving is one of the most debated topics in society. Whether it affects all people or whether or not you’re just good at multi tasking. Yet, all people would come to the agreement that it is one the most dangerous activities to participate in and ends millions of lives yearly. "Drivers and Legislators Dismiss Cellphone Risks” published in New York Times by Matt Richtel and "LOL? Texting While Driving Is No Laughing Matter: Proposing a Coordinated Response to Curb this Dangerous Activity" by Alexis M. Farris are two articles that present variations of ethos, pathos, and logos and make identical arguments claiming that texting and driving is not only dangerous but is shaping the way Americans live. Both articles illustrate several accounts on the dangers of texting and driving and how the activity could potentially be stopped proving both articles to be well accounted for. While Matt Richtel and Alexis. M. Farris both reach the conclusion that texting while driving has a negative impact on people, Farris' article is far deeper and less biased then Richtel's who relies more on personal inference rather than factual evidence.…
Claim: Wal-Mart’s uncharacteristic low prices on merchandise in comparison to other businesses have jeopardized the survival of smaller companies.…
