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Her decision was final and no one could talk her out of it
Daniella Han 5S2

Write a story ending with: “...her decision was final and no one could talk her out of it.”

There she was, sitting on the rocks by the shoreline, watching the sun sets while grieving of losing someone she loves, heartbroken and hopelessly lost. Tears of blood fall from her broken heart, she never thought they would be apart. She remembered he held her tightly in his arms, telling her that they would be forever together. Now that he's gone, she knew he meant never together.

It had been a few months since he left, and yet she was still mourning for his death. She could not accept the fact that he is gone, forever gone. Her family, his family and their friends has always been by her side. To make sure that she don't do anything stupid. To make sure she continues to live as if he was never gone. To make sure she keeps his promise.

When the dark sets in, she walk alone, on a quiet journey back to home. On the journey, memories of her and him flow in her mind. She remembered the times when they are both back in their hometown, they would always hang out and spent the time together catching up on each other's lives. He would always come and fetch her in his dad's antique Nissan's Fairlady. She also remembered the times where he would always sent her a picture of him after his late night workout in the gym, quoting “I'm hot!”

After a few months later, her condition deteriorates. She was restless. Her eye bags were heavy and she started drinking heavy liquor. She was sacked by her boss because of her working attitude and she became jobless. Her life was upside down and she went into depression. She started by doing self harm as in starving herself and scratch her skin till it bleeds.

One day, her mum discover she had scars on her wrist and arms. Her mum ask her how she get those scars but she just kept quiet and look down. Later that day in the evening, she took a walk around the neighborhood. After some time of

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