Sadly, I'll just say that the timing could have not have been worse due to the three people, particularly one, to be standing at your desk when you critiqued her work. Let me apologize and state that she did not think it was vicious; however, you asked her if she even read what she turns in to you. Again, Greyson is meticulous and a perfectionist to a fault so if she turns something in most of the time it has been read too many times, edited too many times, and overthought. A personality trait that is good, but can be detrimental and absolutely exhausting. I hate to say it, but she is much better than she was just 2 years ago. I know you have a large class and many students; therefore, you do not have time to give …show more content…
However, since this incident Greyson has talked to many other students and I have spoke to some of their parents and it appears many are struggling. I think the Advanced English courses in 9th and 10th grade need to be more rigorous to meet the 11th grade expectations. Apparently, many of them have missed some key lessons, including Greyson. As I stated previously, we had no issues in 9th or 10th