Girls Lord Of The Flies Response Essay

Stranded!
I choose project number one, Girls Lord of the Flies. I choose this because while reading the original Lord of the Flies, I thought that it would be more interesting if the author, William Golding, would have had some of the characters girls, instead of all boys. I wish that some of the details weren’t as gruesome as they are. If they weren’t so gruesome, the story would be a little bit more interesting to many readers. This project was not very hard to complete. I first took note on what I would like the story to been written such as the characters being changed and items involved. Soon after that, I wrote a rough draft, and then wrote my final project. I enjoyed this project, because it allowed me to change the novel and write
Shayla was sitting in the ferns close to Rayleigh. They both looked up between the leaves they caught a glimpse of something red. It has to be at the top of Castle Rock thought Rayleigh to herself. It was distant and unmenacing. She composed herself triumphantly, to hear the sounds of the hunt dying away, slowly. Yet no one made a sound; and as the minutes passed, in the green shade, her feeling of triumph faded. At last, the girls heard a voice. But not just a voice, Masyn’s voice, but hushed. “Are you certain?” The savage addressed said nothing. Perhaps he made a gesture. Dante spoke loudly “If you’re fooling us-” Immediately after this, there came a gasp, and a sequel of pain. Rayleigh crouched instinctively. One of the twins was there, outside of the thicket, with Masyn and Dante. “You’re sure she meant in there?” The twin moaned faintly and then squealed again. “She meant she’d hide in there.” “Yes-oh-yes!” Silver laughter scattered among the trees. So they knew. Rayleigh and Shayla picked up there sticks, ready for battle. But what could they do to them? It would take them a week to break a path through the thicket; and anyone who wormed his was in would be helpless.