Character Analysis: Ellen Foster

At the age of ten, most children are dependent on their parents for everything in their lives needing a great deal of attention and care. However, Ellen, the main character and protagonist of the novel Ellen Foster, exemplifies a substantial amount of independence and mature, rational thought as a ten-year-old girl. The recent death of her mother sends her on a quest for the ideal family, or anywhere her father, who had shown apathy to both she and her fragile mother, was not. Kaye Gibbons' use of simple diction, unmarked dialogue, and a unique story structure in her first novel, Ellen Foster, allows the reader to explore the emotions and thoughts of this heroic, ten-year-old girl modeled after Gibbons' own experiences as a young girl.
The novel is written in a short, choppy sentence structure using simple

word choice, or diction, in a stream of consciousness to enable the reader to

perceive the novel in the rational of an eleven-year-old girl. One short, simple sentence is followed by another , relating each in an easy flow of thoughts. Gibbons allows this stream of thoughts to again emphasize the childish perception of life's greatest tragedies. For example, Gibbons uses the simple diction and stream of consciousness as Ellen searches herself for the true person she is. Gibbons uses this to show the reader how Ellen is an average girl who enjoys all of the things normal children relish and to contrast the naive lucidity of the sentences to the depth of the conceptions which Ellen has such a simplistic way of explaining.

Gibbons' and Ellen's harrowing past is related in the novel through

Ellen's inner thoughts and the dialogue between characters. However,
Gibbons uses this to express Ellen's

and her own confusion about their lives. It allows the reader to gain a better

comprehension of Gibbons' own still mixed feelings about her past. The lack

of correct punctuation shows the unimportance of the formal punctuation to both

the author and the true meaning of the novel.

Punctuation is not the only bizarre element of Gibbons' style, the page

setup that she uses to convey her story is completely genuine. The setup is a

form of a series of flashbacks from her present happiness as she recalls her

miserable childhood; these flashbacks are triggered by things in her new family

that remind her of her older days with her relatives. Gibbons' use of this

incredible stylistic element tells much about herself and the character that she

has modeled after herself. Ellen and Kaye Gibbons both struggle with the

horrible memories of their past lives, even though they live in pleasure and

happiness now. Gibbons' uses this to convince the reader of the horrible