As a student who's taken English classes as far as I can remember, this English class has nothing to compare, especially with involvement because the way we were involved helped my …show more content…
From my first paper to my most recent paper my topic sentence have drastically changed for the better I went from sounding like a high school freshmen to a undergraduate college student. “People across the world(not only America) have the same concern about going to college, and is almost everyones main concerns, which is the expense of going to college.” That being the first topic sentence from my first essay ever written in this class is very scatter brained along with no major argument towards it. In my most recent paper my topic sentence progressed greatly with much more syntax and with a much more clear argument. “Hessel believes that outrage needs to take place in today’s young generation because we are seeming to be content with all these social issues arising.” This thesis has a strong argument, good grammatical structure, and a firm syntax structure, making my argument