Books Are Deadly As Weapons Analysis

As this year comes to an end, I can look back and see how I have grown as a writer. At the beginning of the year, I was very unthoughtful and did not think much about what I was writing. Many of my mistakes were silly errors due to my lack of focus. In the first sentence of my revised paper, I wrote, “ Ray bradbury a world where all his characters’ think books are a deadly as weapons”. Going back and look at this makes me want to pull my hair out. After the changes, the sentence ended up making sense, “ Ray Bradbury describes a world where all of his characters think books are as deadly as weapons”. The difference between the two sentences is crazy. Another one of my weaknesses, is coming up with a claim. I never felt like I was able to get