Analysis Of A Memoir: Julio

Julio, I enjoyed reading your memoir. I definitely learned a lot about you from the part you have finished. I look forward to seeing where you are going with the piece. As you finish, keep in mind the end goal of what you want the reader to leave with after finishing the memoir. What are you trying to teach us about your life? When first reading the line “I honestly do not know in what moment my sister was taken from my hands” I thought that you were speaking figuratively and this was your way of telling us that she had died. After continuing, I realized that you actually meant her being physically taken from your arms. Maybe consider rewording so that we know you mean literally not being sure when the paramedics took her from your arms to